All Comments on 'A Home for the Holidays!'

A great change from the usual stuff on here. Let’s all celebrate the solstice!

Well written your story had me hooked from the start.

Loved the flowing story and the love in it. The fantasy theme is not my "drink" if I took the wolf out for me it was a true love story that left a smile on my face :-) (furry or not)

I endorse the earlier comments. My only criticism is that you need to improve the editing. There are mistypings, spelling errors and a few grammar errors also.

Interesting theme for a story, especially in the Romance section. It was a bit difficult to tell when Endres was a wolf and when a man sometimes.

Also, the half-dozen times the word 'fuck' was used in expressions to try to convey surprise did nothing for the story. It seemed like they were thrown in just to use the word.

Lovely story. Don’t let the haters sway you. Is there going to be a part 2?

The chickens stopped laying eggs? What will Gaston have for breakfast? Jokes aside, this was an interesting story (in a good way).

Some lovely descriptions , but repetitive. Also, I agree that words like fuck used as epithets don’t add anything. Would have enjoyed a show down between Endres and Bryce. Keep it up.

Lovely and beautiful descriptive story

lovely story, but the rape was completely unnecessary. As plot points go being abducted and almost burnt at the stake is dramatic & traumatic enough for anything. Adding the rape is superfluous and narrative unnecessary: for Aaron's objections her status as a human made the most sense but you could have also used her birth mark as an additional obstacle if needed (with Ivy Bellingham he was being ridiculous). If you really wanted to keep the rape and have it serve the story it could have happened on the mountain and Endres could have killed Bryce there - no. Joan of arc impersonations necessary. Having both means neither gets properly addressed (especially in such short form writing)