All Comments on 'A Hot Day At The Beach'

K.K. If you do half of what you write you must do alright. I don't know how much more fantasy I can take but you keep writing sweets and I'll keep reading.The girl at the beach got what she wanted but the woman with Joel just got a little taste or a big taste of something large. Great stories ,ciao luv.

I need to do more open water swimming. Very hot!

good pacing, well written, hopefully exquisitely experienced. more . . . please!

You tell a hot story. Keep on writing. By the way, you have a hot ass.

Pure lust. A very hot story. Nicely done!

You have a very sexual mind!

Great story!

One of the best-written stories i have read.

well written and very sensual

This is not a "get in the mood" story. This is a cum -explode erotica masterpiece. xo

Hello.

Well written, had a similar encounter years ago brought back horny memories.

Life can be good.

Thanks for a marvelous story, keep it up :)

You are agreat narrator, and so hot - need to go dipping to chill

Oh my! I felt like I was there like he was penetrating me ;) Very nice and very descriptive. made me so wet reading it. Please continue with more stories XOXO

Love your descriptive writing style! Thanks for the hot read. B

Hi, we met in the chatroom. Clearly this is a deeply felt fantasy for you, vividly told.

This is really well written with fantastic imagery. A reader can almost feel what her characters are feeling. Fantastic and sexy!

Wow, I've had lots of beach fantasies, but never that quick. Very, very hot. I kept imagining Tom Selleck. You might like my Ocean Breezes or Family Vacation.

I love your writing style. Very descriptive and immersive.

Nicely done! I love the attention to the details and the raw sexual emotions. On to some of your other stories. Thank you for sharing your writing talents with us.

"Reaching down with one hand, I pressed into my lower stomach to see if I could feel him in there from the outside, but I couldn't"... absolutely lovely, sensual, erotic, evocative... well done kylie love it