All Comments on 'A Hot Night in Paris Ch. 02'

I've liked both these stories. Both well written and paced. Be interesting to see where it goes from where you ended it. There has to be another chapter !

I can understand the quick pace of this story and indeed it was still good. However, it still would have been better had you described more of the sex and lingered on the sensations for each, how their bodies felt during the 69, a little more about their 5 couplings (or at least a detailed description of the 1st time he unloads into her). Still good, but don't rush, ok? The thing about Brad is the mitigating factor so I can understand the kind of desperate feeling of it all.

It was very nice but it left me wondering and frustrated

hot man hot

Will there be a ch 3 where she is pregnant or choosing between her brother and the man she thought she loved?? How about when Paris is over.. What will happen then??

Please write more! I would like to know what else happens.

I have read chapter 1 and 2. I am now looking for to chapters 3 , 4, 5, and more.....

Thank your writeing this great story so far, and shareing with us. I want to see Danny beat Brads ass. I want to see the brother and sister marry and live and love in Paris.

I wish I could live in France.

Please finish this great story with 3 more chapters

Wonderful story, please dont stop. I do need more. "Please"

I need to know what happens next.

You really need to finish the story. It has some great build up and then you stop with nothing more.

Definitely in need of final chapter(s) to finish out this beautiful story. I loved your penchant for having him keeping his mouth shut at the appropriate times. One thing I didn't understand was having her put stockings on him, other than to validate your stocking/leg fetish. The one thing I personally have an objection to was all the baby implications. Other than that, still a grate narrative..Thank you . . . .