All Comments on 'A Hot Night In The Club'

by Satyrinneed

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Has Promise...

You have an interesting concept here, but you need to develope it a lot more to make it come together... I'd love to see a full version of this story.

LooneyLooneyalmost 20 years ago
Great concept start. I hope you develop it fully

Great concept start. I hope you develop it fully

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