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Click hereShe decided she would wear her sexiest white Victoria Secret pushup bra and matching panties. She wore the sheer white blouse she had worn that morning with a short black skirt.
Anytime Alex had requested her to wear this skirt she had referred to it as her fuck me skirt.
Sandy looked at herself in the mirror. Her hair wasn't hiding the hickey enough to make it not noticeable. Sandy brushed her hair back and tied it into a ponytail, the hickey on her neck now in plain sight. She then tied a purple bow into it and slipped on her black high heels.
Sandy fixed herself a drink and went out to the patio. Alex would be home soon.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoGreat start, nose dived into shallow teenage fucking story. How about rewriting it. The bones of the story are fantastic. Readers on this site want more depth and intrigue,? Communication with John before going to Denver. Much more teasing with Steve. Get Diane more into Denver story There is a lot of potential ,,,, use it!!
Anonymousover 3 years agoSame old trash. Garbage in, garbage out.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoIs every guy she runs into a rapist? Story has gone completely into the sewer. The writer has to have an IQ of a slug.
Stubbyonealmost 5 years agoYour writing is like a 5th grader. Very stilted and matter of fact . Do you ever read what you write out loud to yourself before submitting? The ideas are good, but the execution is not. Get a good or better editor. Keep trying. 3 for effort
rocketeer50over 10 years agoEither have her raped as a punishment for playing with fire with neighbor Steve or wait to bring him in later, after hubby gets used to the play with John. I'm not convinced she could get turned on after he rapes her mouth. Hubby has been getting used to her play with John all along, but the Steve thing (again, unless it's her punishment) is just too much. Alex has to get used to her extra curricular time first-- being in the same room or in a closet watching her with John. Then introduce them to a swap with the neighbors.
I don't know if you can redeem this. You may have to kill Steve off, or tie him up while Alex and Sandy seduce his wife to make the power balance even.
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