All Comments on 'A Hotwife is Born'

Very good first story

Well, at least he seems well-adjusted to playing 3rd fiddle from now on. Within a couple of years, he will be nothing but a paycheck and a security blanket.

Great story! Keep writing!

Very hot story, looking forward to more :D

Looking forward to reading about Lauren's next sexual adventure wothout her husband.

I ghosted this story when the two guys were pressing cocks together. Gross. I’m not gay, and I’m not looking for such gay crap - this could have been a decent hotwife story til you ruined it.

Great story, can't wait to read more

Super. What could be better?

A good meal ticket with a jerk husband and a big dick on the side for fun.

Contrary to what you read on LW, women aren't as dumb as men are.

Weak.

Hot! Well done!

Great erotic story. Concise, well-written, and flowing naturally. Thanks for the story.

Loved the story! Hope they have a wonderful modern marriage that supports cuckolding

Excellent story. I liked the pacing and the descriptions. The only thing I didn't enjoy was the details of the cock comparison. The contrast was nice; I know everyone has a different fetish or fantasy, but for my personal taste, the detailed interaction was just a bit too much. I like that this was more of a stag story and less of a cuck story. Keep up the great work! This is a fantastic first submission; I look forward to more stories.

There absolutely needs to be a part 2 quickly

That marriage is heading for the dumpster. Will the psychologist husband over analyze this bullshit and get all paranoid and lose his job or will the high school principle wife start fucking all the teachers and students and end up trash like she seems to be becoming? Will the children end up fucked up because of their irresponsible parents. And, in this day and age, invites a stranger from a bar into their home, lets them stay and invites them back to fuck up their home, marriage and family even more? No mention of the potential for diseases. Just a stupid, foolish and irresponsible story.

I thought I was wrong about the story

I didn't see any warnings.

I hot curious it had a 3.8 rating.

I really hoped I was wrong.

Started to read it then stopped...

I was so right -- it is a CUCK story.

I hate cuck stories.

I enjoyed the story, although, the husband's lack of angst about his wife fucking a complete pick up stranger with a huge cock and bareback is unusual for their first time sharing. That said, it is a good 1st effort and I hope more to come. Maybe try FMF so he can get some strange and some FF action as well. All in the name of broadening their sexual horizons.😜

This was Stag and Vixen perfection. At least in this reader's humble opinion. No humiliation, the Vixen's pleasure and the couple's loving relationship center stage.

The first times are always special and extremely hot, but I can't wait to read more about this couple's journey.

I'd love to read another chapter on this one. Maybe have them secretly texting each other. He wants her raw and no birth control and she reluctantly gives in and let's him breed her.

If the wife is going to give pleasure to two Cocks then this story is the way it should be.

Really enjoyed this story.. deserves more than a 5 rating.

I love it me and the wife was away like that and and a nice looking black guy came up and started talking to her buying her drinks she was getting real lose and he asked if we want to go bake to his place for drinks so we did and when we get there she was really feeling good so let her play and she got on her knees and pulled out the biggest cock she has ever seen so make a long story short she took him bare back and now we got a new son with the prettiest kinky hair you ever seen and she still goes and spends time with him while a stay home and baby sit

A very well written story. One of my favorite wife sharing stories. It's my perfect situation. No cuckold, no humiliation, just pure hot sex between 3 consenting adults. Absolutely loved it. Can't wait for chapter 2. 5 stars

Great story. A very attractive couple but Lauren is gorgeous, fit and with incredible large DDD tits that stand proud and firm on her chest. She enjoys showing off her busty hot body. I loved their first hot wife experience when her husband and Jake shared Lauren. No cuck with this couple. I really look forward to the next chapter.

Great story. I really liked how everyone was enjoying it with no one left out.

I would have liked if she joined the bull in the whole to clean up and have sex the rest of the night while the husband slept on the couch.

Can wait for part 2.

Just more cuck garbage. No angst, no cuck. Anonymous cuck with wife and black guy, come back when your illiterate ass finishes sixth grade.

Was going great until the gay stuff. But hey, it’s your story. Writing was very good but this wasn’t quite how I like wife sharing stories to go. 5* for the standard of writing compared to most stories on Literotica.

Thanks for your writing.