All Comments on 'A House and a Wife Both Warmed'

Thanks! Your story is not bad at whole. but.........

"Dee and Daniel looked at each other and smiled, rather like the cat that had just caught the canarie. Dee explained to my young wife the nature of a Swinger's Club, "Come on [Jennifer] don't tell me you've never heard about swinging? Well, a Swinger's Club is where couples meet other partners to enjoy each other's company."

[Julie] blushed down to her roots, "And you do mean 'enjoying' each other's company?"

So real name of the narrator's bride is Jennifer or Julie?

Not very original.Wife tries giant cock becomes size queen and hubby ends up.as the.cuckold loser getting scraps.Been done way to often and they havent been married a year? Stick a fork in this union and move on.Well written but totally unoriginal

Not much good to say...

I gave it a 5

again by bigger and thicker cocks that he has. The boy can satisfy her and you couldn't satisfy your old lady. So let her have her sexual need filled by a bull!! If not she will leave him just like your old lady left you dear annony!! Stop reading these and maybe you'll recover from your sad little hurt!! Gace it a 5

Ask any woman who has worked in an STD clinic, where they look at dripping cocks, and vaginas, all day. They all dump their average dicked men and take up with the first super cock they can corral, right?

Wrong. Only Ronnie Johnnie Bonnie is cock crazy, and that's because she's just crazy.

Keep dreaming. Maybe you and Slonnie can get together and share your miserable lives. Now that is huge.

His doubt: "What would I do?"...Simple, very simple: Get revenge on the couple that in the beginning were married, but at the middle were girlfriend and boyfriend, and divorce the wife...She now is damaged goods...1*

for your effort

Why is that even a question? Get a divorce, or failing that, be roommates or FWB's if you really want; but why stay married is the real question.

What does she possibly have to offer her husband?

WHY

Well-written, stroke story. Even though I did not like the direction the story was moving, your writing kept me reading until the end. But then, you left a bad impression: swinging is one thing, and hubby wants Dee. You even gave us a reason why Dee helped the seduction.

But seeing permanent marks on his wife would kill any feeling hubby has for her--if he is human. So, you should have given him a normal reaction by having him admit he let things go too far, and now has to pay the price of separation and divorce, and to be more careful in his next relationship.

How much fun can this story be? Horrible. A "1" for both a bad story and because Bonnie liked it.

You have dog shit for brains, sick shit bitch.

Anything that slut bonnie favors got to be bad. 1*

Wimp husband of stupendous stupidity deserves his fate.

he might as well just commit suicide. His wife will leave him now for big cock not knowing that it will destroy her. When her pussy is so big you can drive a truck through it and she cant feel a normal dick and what happens if she cant find a big dick to marry her. But then how will she handle with en her hubby fucks every lady that walks. That exclusitivity is gone. She will now never be able to be in a monogamous relationship and what about having kids and a family. As for her Daniel took her ass But hell if it was me I'd fuck both her left and right ears. See how she feels with a hole through her head where my dick fucked her brains out. A woman that will do that will now never lead a normal life unless living with swinging and never knowing who your hubby is screwing. Well I hope she at least has bunches of orgasms. As that will be the extent of her life from now on. And as for Dee Well if she wanted my fingers and mouth from now on. I'd want her to provide me with some of her female friends to fuck also and also I'd want her ass every time we fucked . As for Jennifer I would divorce her and just fuck his wife occasionally as every woman eeds normal occasionally or otherwise as she says one fuck and shes done for days.. Lol So that why Daniel would be fucking half the women he knows or the ones who let him. And by the way & is normal Not 5 Im normal and I bet I still get more pussy that most men with that 10 inch 7 around Its good one time then when you hurt for days after and have to take pain meds to even walk or sleep is not normal. Although Daniel could possibly keep a cow or two around to use when his wife is out of commission absolutely hate stories like that that tries to emasculate hubbys with the supposedly superior power of a big dick. Most men like that can't do anything but fuck and our completely useless otherwise. But if I had a wife treat me as she did and gave things up I'd never had. Believe me I would definitely make sure she didn't have an ear wax problem for a while. Matter of fact I would make her so you could blow out a candle through her ears

Another wife that will never have a family or kids. or for that matter another woman that will never truly be loved. Fucked yes. Loved no. she may have kids one day But wills he know who the father is. Thing is never will she ever have that feeling of having kids and going to ball games with her hubby to watch them play ball. She may have the kids but having a loving relationship ever again. No. The guy here is also totally pathetic also. Why do so may people that write these stories think so many men are true wimps and will always bow to the guy with the bigger dick. thing is they are one in a million and because they are blessed or is it cursed. They can never truly love one woman and the woman that falls for that will always end up wanting what they lost with that smaller dicked hubby.For that little bit of pleasure they occasionally get from a man that will never care or love them. other than to make himself feel like a hot shot because he gave her what in the short term was pleasure but in long term will end up being pure misery. This marriage is toast

and technically, it seems to be well written. It did, however, leave me wondering who Julie was … a good editor can help there, and they are free. I use them for my stories, and as many times as I read-reread my own copy, she always finds errors.

If you are going to write a so-called cuckold story, you should say so up front. There is no problem with them, but I assumed at the start that this was wife-swapping story. It had to be obvious to the most simple-minded person on the planet that it was quickly going to develop into Daniel interested only in making another conquest for his crib, and making the husband a cuckold in the process.

Daniel is a jerk.

My reaction to Daniel continuing to do anything to my wife I told him not to do, would have been to pull him off my wife, smack him in the chops, and head for the door with my wife … but that’s just me!

This could have been a nice and sexy couple’s story, but was spoiled by the introduction of a moron who just happens to have been born with a big dick. Also, it is important to remember in writing stories of this type, that although the vagina can stretch some, most women are only between 5 and 6 inches deep inside. Taking a 10 incher all the way would be difficult … and painful. There is a little item called a cervix, which is kind of a stop sign … a penis cannot get past it. Just saying.

I would also have warned her that if she got the tat that Daniel wanted her to; I would have divorced her and licked her winsome ass out of the house. This is the reaction of a real man. Am I just jealous of Daniel? Hardly! I have had the privilege of the company of many wonderful women in my life. I am about the same size as Doug in this story, and have never had any complaints.

I don’t know who BonnieTaylor2 is, but it is my impression that she haunts this site only to bring grief and pain to the Anonymous writers who also stalk these stories. She seems to be winning the battle. So, Good luck to Bonnie!

Anonymous142

A lot of the emphasis on big cocks comes from porn.

Most people don't know the reason for big cocks in porn, they use men with them so that they can put two or three inches in and still keep their bodies far enough apart for the audience to see that they are having sex.

This is also why they use such weird positions and awkward body angles, it is all for the camera.

It is not real sex, that is why they are called actors.

There should be a limit to once innocence and awaken-es. should stop immediately looking at the things going out of control. He could have easily left the Host visualizing their attitude-but he didnot thus resulted into Him becoming a cuck, a rather can say a spectator.

Te choice is now-He should leave Her as early as possible-other face humiliation.

Story ended up in the realms of fantasy, husband could have stopped this at any time but just wimped away in hiding.

....even certain phrasing looked very familiar.

Perhaps that's because you have filled your head with these stories and this is what has distilled from it.

Look, hubby can't have it both ways. He can't have/want an innocent wife and a debauched big cock whore at the same time. He and Jennifer both had the capacity to put a stop to the proceedings at every point along the way. Dee and her big dildo hubby were clear about their intentions, but almost nobody will force an issue in the face of resolve.

And that vacillation by our "hero" is at the root of my distaste for this class of LW stories. Well, that and the fact that not one of you has offered anything new in the last 5 or so years.

Since he won't grow a backbone, our "hero" is destined to watch his wife become another man's slut, probably to the point she will end up spending more time with Daniel than our "hero". It's not far to go from there, where she decides to have his baby. Other than the histrionics, it won't matter anyway, because this marriage ended virtually on it's one year anniversary. Now, it's just squabbling over stuff, logistics and paperwork.

The one potential consolation is that Dee is another loser in this game. She's still addicted, but will, as she said, be glad for the respite from "monster dong"....so may end up carrying our "hero's" baby in a somewhat justifying twist. I would love to see Daniel "donkey dong" get some comeuppance, but that is more because our hero is such an unmitigated wuss. If he'd shown some character at any point, this train wreck would have been averted......but then you'd have to come up with something new, wouldn't you? The tax to your creative powers may have been too much, leaving you a drooling lump in then end.

I doubt you'll go that way, anyway, as it breaks with the entire, trite, storyline common to this scenario. Too, bad almost anything new/different would be most welcome.

Not too many technical errors, so I won't quibble there....but please watch your person and tense as you progress through the story. Pussy.

why not just write one so we can grad you sorry ass. I gave this a 5

Well written as a piece of erotica. As with porn videos, we all know these a unlikely events and that is the attraction. No point in writing about what you can see everyday. It is the unusual things that get attention.

Please do the human race a favor and off yourself. You nasty self absorbed piece of shit.Jesus woman get a life Do you have any idea what your comments.read like? Psychotic spittle from a crazy person .This is a free porn site you crazy bat .Back the fuck off.

I was put here to make sure you never forget that your wife left your sorry as and she now has a better man in every respect while you live alone reading these stories and jerking your sorry little cock off. So GO FUCK YOURSLEF WITH A VIBRATOR dear annony! I'm not leaving and I will always comment on your dumbass comments when I'm on here. Eat shit and die and fuck you in the hearts!!

Thanks for your explanation of the reason for big dicks and porn movies. I had thought that as the men could not put anything beyond the 5-6" deep vagina, any extra inches are irrelevant. Now I know why they are used in films.

Dear Bonnie bitch, fuck the wife in this story and fuck you too! She's a sick piece of shit and so are you.

The husband should have stopped it right away!!!! Since he didn't he has no rason to bitch!! he got his cock off a few times so they're equal unless she goes back which I'm sure she will!! I would

Thank you bonnie I bet someone I could stir you up by writing a comment like yours. Bonnie you are beyond predictable like putting meat in front of a rabid dog.I could give a shit what you do.You are the laughings tock of this site and the funny thing is everyone knows it but you.Keep.spinning bonnie one of these days you will.just spin off into space.

The story isn't even close to being realistic. First off, anybody wearing a black jock strap is a douche bag. Secondly, any man who enters into a dick measuring contest is a total loser. Lastly, any husband that doesn't want his wife to have sex with another man and does nothing about it is a total pathetic weenie.

Ridiculous.

Seven inches around?You are what..fourteen years-old?

Kiddo, this story belongs to FANTASY category.

When a husband is lucky enough to marry a lady that has only slept with him and is perfectly sized to his equipment. You never get her in a sexual situation with another man. They were predators and new once he stretched her that husband would most likely never be able to make that intensity. He should have stopped it. Both are in for a life of trials and guilt. They both lost it just might take some time for her to see it.

Dumb, no man would allow it to go that far if he didn't want it to. Me personally, I'm no tough guy, would have put the first thing I could grab over his head and if somehow it went that far divorce would be definate.

I really dislike these stories where the husband or boyfriend is totally emasculated. Its not realistic and I think it makes for bad writing. I don't find it erotic and definitely not romantic. If you're going to write a story like this it needs to end making the reader glad they read it. This story just made me sad that a happy marriage was destroyed by two predators and and a dumb ass wife. The husband was just thrown away as you would your trash. If you write a chapter 2 where he takes his wife back and seeks revenge on his neighbors then I'll think its a worth while story. It was a waste my time reading it.

HAVE A CAN OF IT AND A BUCKET OF PISS TOP THE VOMIT.

CHEERS!

Thank you for sharing your story, Daniel.

I know it is every man's nightmare to have his wife penetrated by one more endowed than himself. That being said, the fantasy behind the story is intriguing, if not exciting. From online sex sites over the years I know there are men and women who do fulfill their desires this way.

Thanks again.

T

Did you write this story over an extended time period?

The first half is about how into the sex everybody is, then in mid-stream you back out and make it a tale of woe and despair. You couldn't even salvage it when Dee woke up and fucked Doug.

Sorry you can't satisfy your wife, stupid story .

Not very believable but hot al the same. I'd live for my wife and I to be invited to Dee and Daniels. I'd love for Daniel to be fucking my wife all night like this.

Loved the story!!

After this, she will no longer be the woman he married. His insecurities and her increasingly kinky appetites will drive them apart. But he's an asshole and a wimp for letting it go so far. Is he really going to stand for getting inked?

This story made sort of sick to my stomach.

Vote 1* for every story rated by 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄 (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

for the "loving couple" to show up. No respect here, let alone love.

This tiny dick loser author is trying to live through the big dick asshole namesake in his story... Kind of weak and pathetic....

That will never happen? There will however be the 1st anniversary of the divorce to celebrate.

Cuckold starr diagusting to me, Why can't you pathetic beeings Write into the header that you are afucking cucky

This is by far the worst story I have read so far. You couldn't stop her?

Have the bitch killed. Go after the other two fuckers and burn their world down. Get a few mercs to castrate mr big dick and throw acid in his whore wives face.

Fuck up their world like they fucked up yours.

I'm 7" 3/4" With a little over a 5" girth. even after having four kids my late wife couldn't take it after the third time. Your wife! took almost ten inches with a seven inch girth. All night long. He had taken her once and once in the throat another on her behind before you woke up to hear him tell her that he had just come three more times. And they still kept it up even after you did his wife. Wow!! Your wife must be pretty used to this guy if she could go that long without getting to sore to keep on going. This was just a pretty bed story with no thought of what happens in the real world. You couldn't stop her? Really? And you can't stop him from putting his brand on her?

After the divorce, you can leave her like she wants.

Then film her next session with Daniel, and post it widely.

Olfrog14x

thanks for the great story! hope dee and jennifer get to worship daniel's cock together ... and then doug can't help but join in ...

Once again the husband can't do a dam thing but stare and hide. They let it happen instead of stopping things. Time for more ideas than this weak ass husband stuff

Martian Slut Ray Alert.

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It's so idiotically unbelievable that a reasonably intelligent and sane woman would destroy her life, up to and including all her familial and social relationships, because she gets fucked once by big dick. There goes home, investments, property, savings, self-respect, marital love, happiness..... poof.

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It's an easy plot device that works on cuck/jerk-off pr0n.

Cuck takes his whore to a party.

Anxiously awaiting

The second part. Good story line sequence. I voted the max.

Why would you care what she does, she is your ex-wife by now isn't she?

All cuckolding haters still mange to read the story just so they have a good whinge to pretend it didn't turn them lol f'ing great story and I'd let my wife do this...

Cuck rubbish

Why If so horrified did he not stop it.She jumps up ask him to leave.It's all on him.

Then no input from her at the end.Just

she gets a tattoo. Disliked the ending most of all.

I hope this removes Doug from the gene pool.

He completely failed to support his wife in leaving.

Perverse yet strangely exciting. Wild imagery. Cheers 🥂

Best answer is to just get rid of the whore