All Comments on 'A Humiliating Finale'

by Misschievous1

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Red Sox FanRed Sox Fanabout 16 years ago
Excellent Work!

Very good...Enjoyed this greatly!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very, very hot!

Very hot story - You are a very talented writer

eightballbumeightballbumabout 16 years ago
Very well done

Very well done. Nice length with non stop action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Permission?

What? She's his mother and he's 9 years old? Kick the bitch to the curb and lock the door. That kind of disrespect is unacceptable. What a bitch. No one would put up with either her attitude or her behavior.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Constant Typos

Learn to spell check your work, the constant typos definitely downgraded the story. Is there something wrong something with your 'h' key? You're constantly missing it when trying to spell words like "his"

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