All Comments on 'A Hurdle is Cleared'

Not that it's bad. Interesting story. Odd character build up. Keep at it.

2 stars

DragonRider55

Nice to know that two sisters fucking their brothers.

I like your style; it's different from most but the stream of consciousness works well here.

I found this to be a very well told tale in a style I've never seen nor read before. I loved it. You're different, brave . . . . you're a writer ! It's as if you've un-scrambled complex social interactions. Thank You ~ for a pleasant experience.

Would have loved more details about their bodies. Hairy or shaved? Breast sizes. Sex at a tree is tacky. I love how you break down social stigmas. Two consenting adults should not have limits. Looking forward to next chapter.

for some reason, the mood of this story reminded me very much of the book. lost horizon.