All Comments on 'A Husband's Revenge Ch. 01'

not too good

Anonymous, about your comment that Slirpuff's main character is "a voyeuristic cuck," haven't you read other stuff he's written? He loves reconciliation with cheating sluts.

Standard trope ofnthe 12 inch black dick. That is like less than 1 in 10 million odds. Check a penis size calculator. Do a little research. And he just happens to see the first time she takes Nick up her ass? Right... and on top of that she acceded even though first time the pain would be monstrous. Lastly no woman's vagina can fully accommodate all 12 inches of such a nigh mythical cock. He would be bottoming out well before them and smashing her cervix which for many women equates to pain.

If you had an 'editor', I really hope he/she was not paid ;) . You alone should have caught the many errors, that seemed to case one to pause, when reading your tale. Hope you have improved, and thanks for your effort, it is way better than I could have done.

CAUSE not CASE :)

Good until end with the gangbang/gang tape ... could have done better than that

Regarding his penis: 2.5 inches around (circumference) is pencil thin. That would be a diameter of just over 3/4 inch. Circumference = 3.14 X diameter. Maybe you meant to say he was 2.5 inches across (diameter). 2.5 X 3.14 = 7.85 inches around.

Strike one, the vagina that stays permanently stretched after sex with a larger than average penis. Strike two, the black boyfriend with the penis of equine proportions. Please don't let there be a strike three by adding another annoying or offensive cliche.

good start.

Cock. , size ridiculous 12 inch is to ridiculous you can't pound a pussy or arse to that depth. Then we have it so thin it wouldn't touch the sides. A very thick 8 inch would be massively impressive. So it spoiled the story.

Big black clown and cheating bitch fixing to get burned.

cock size was stupid, to long to fit fully into any pussy or as and to thin to feel 2*

Hope the dumb asshole was recording the cheating white cunt

What a cuck