All Comments on 'A is for Adventure'

Wow, thank you for an exciting adventure!! There is hope for all of us aging folks. Now, where's my biker???

Hot Dog and Woweee ,if thats not a true story it sure should be. i am not too sure about the bike, a dildo and a corduroy road. might a bit much even for an adventuress.

Now in my mind THIS is what literate erotica is all about! Cracking story, well written, nice pace, and above all believeable. Many of the short and stark writers could well do to read this and learn!

Well SCORPIO you have done it again. True love mixed with a touch of comedy – what more could we ask for? Yes there's hope for the 'old farts' of this world! Stories of this high quality are not what we expect from LITEROTICA these days. Pete.

Brought tears to my eyes. Thinking of taking the 01 Wide Glide for a three day trip.

good story about us guys seeing the ones we love as lovers. I am 60 this year and met a lady at the docks as we brought our sail boat in. She was over 65 and i thought of her when you descibed this lady. I would have bedded her with so much "relish". style and looks still make the mature ladies desirable. thanks for writing.

Very sweet.

True love and adventure will always warm the heart ( at any age)

That was awesome.. No matter how old ya might feel that don't mean ya can't have funnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!! Age is just a number.. Hope to see more on this story with returns of all the friends they met along the way.

A first........could not leave this area until I said what was on my mind.........FANTASTIC......EROTIC.....SENSUAL! !

Amazing story of two baby boomers finding each other ,,and realizing that love, sex and adventure ...is not only for the young. But better when you are old enough to appreciate and value it for the gift it is. Thank you for this. Brilliant!

What a great story!

Boyd

This is one of the best stories Ive read on this site.

Gosh darn it! Sixty years old isn't over the hill, if not invalid, after all. Scorpio44, once again, has done a great service for those of us a bit up there in years who love sex and being sexy, love adventure, and have lived enough to appreciate the whole adventure that life and living can be. Hot sex; great romance. Generosity of spirit, and beautiful open hearts. What a fantastic and happy story.

This was a true pleasure to read. Makes me feel

that I should not think about how near the end of the road is!

what a great story and an inspiration to all us nearly over the hill people, i hope to read many more of your stories. thank you

You are a great writer. enjoyed the story.

Thanks for entertaing us.

Mike from Texas

Superbly told. Thank you.

Fantastic story , thank you.

Fantastic story. Loved it. And I know the areas you described, as I went to school in San Luis Obispo, so it was fun to hear of old familiar places.

The story very well told it kept my interest. I am sure the writer was writing parts from personal experience of that area.

Now this is the kind of story that I like to find on Literotica. Well structured, well written and with a truly romantic plot, while at the same being highly erotic.

Thanks

One of the most engaging and entertaining stories I've read in a long time; and from a man who writes so very well! I very much liked the fact that the couple who started out as work-mates and semi-strangers, became a couple.<br>

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I liked the fact that during the telling, Pete was determined to give Colleen a birthday adventure to remember, and that Colleen was willing to let Pete do this and to give her a series of "firsts".<br>

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A very beautiful story, filled with tender moments and "real" loving. Not every story has to contain BDSM, or anal intercourse to make it "HOT" or to make the female reader wet. You have accomplished <i>that</i> feat quite well by the gentle 'telling'.<br>

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Definitely a story I will read again and again... and wish.

Shame on you for trying to warn anyone off of reading such a wonderful story. Even if they do not care for motorcycles, they would have to enjoy the love and humor from such a creative storyteller. Now, quit reading these comments and go write me another one.

I only rarely comment on stories here, but this one moved me to respond.

I loved the story, you have a talent of making your characters very believable and alive. I read many of the comments and agree with most. Keep up the good writing.

fabulous writing

This made my eyes water and my throat hurt.

Happy people making each other happy - just the way it's supposed to be. It's also great to see someone who understands that 'sexy' and 'sixty' are not opposites. Another good one - bravo!

I adore a HOT SEX saga when it is wrapped into an adventurous romance. And this love story is a ROMANCE all in capitals! And truly an adventure. Every element of the plot and every aspect of the characters is on the money. The relationships are wonderfully realistic, including that of the conservative church couple from Oakland. And first, last, and always (and in all ways) our heroes put joyous, laughing sex back into age sixty. They are sexy sexty years old! (My own adventure of making love in four counties in one day took place when I was 50 and she was 43. Bless you for reminding me!) Thank you for a splendid, truly loving, sensual romance. I am ready for my cold shower now.

If you are old enough to recognize where my title came from, (Amos & Andy on the radio) we are basicaly from the same generation. This was a fantastic story. Dang!! I read it again after reading it for the second time. It was so well crafted that I almost felt that I was there peeking in the window and looking over their shoulders holy cow!! Loved it!

That 100 I scored for your story kindly tack on a few more commas and zeros, Ok The polarbear from Canada, Eh!!

... to find love and lust all mixed in together to make your love life still simmer as it's never done before. Great story.

that I have read on here. So full of fun, humour, passion and, above all else, adventure - just loved the way the story bowled along at a cracking pace from one adventure to the next. Even the sex was humourous and not in your face. A brilliant read and well written - thank you. One other thing I like is to follow places on Google Maps to see just where people travel to and the Sows Ear is a real place too - found that by googling it - would love to eat there as it sounds a wonderful place and the food looks so delicious and expensive.

If ever I visit the States I will go that way just to find the 'Sows Ear'. A brilliant story and a damn good read.

Another super winner -

I can see that one sooo clearly - I don't wear big boots these days when I ride or leathers (nylon and Kevlar are more comfortable and good year round), but I do love the wind and fresh air and the sounds.

Double up would be the next best thing to being there lol

Here I was about to give up on being spontaneous and fun-loving at 66. My wife is only 56! Thank you for reminding me that I am not dead yet... Time to buy another bike again!

We live half a continent apart but I do love my 60 yr old biker. Pete reminds me a lot of him...'bad boy' imiage but far from bad at all! Reading this helps me feel closer to him. Thank you.

A very enjoyable tale. Thank you.

This story gives me something to strive for as I get older. Thank you.

THE VERY BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ AND MOST INNOVATIVE MANNER THE PROCEEDINGS WENT AND FINISH IS VERY COMPASSIONATE. NOTHING MORE CAN BE SAID.

And what an adventure they had!!!

There may be hope for this old Widow yet... What a WONDERFUL STORY...

Bikers and romance, what's not to love?

Love comes at any age. This is a tale everyone over 55 should read. Masterful writing.

For those of you who are not motorcycle riders,

Four wheels move your body.....

Two wheels move your SOUL....

we hope this story is true. My wife and I met at a friend house for easter and there was serious sparks between us,she was engaged to someone else. Six months to the day we were married. On Oct.12th we will be celebrating our 26th wedding anniversary. We have been at least as adventurous as these 2 and sometimes even more..

Just great.

This is coming from somebody older than the guy, who ever just rode a bicycle, LOL.

If this is 60 then sign me up! I hope to be just as adventurous as Colleen and Pete at 60! At 48, I have my work cut out for me...YIPPEE! This is exactly what a mature, sexy, romantic love story should be! You knocked it outta the park! I wish I could give this story more than just 5 stars! I have a new favorite author. Thank you Scorpio44!

I'm only 89, wishing I was 48 again, like fountaindancer. But I've been a widower for 11 years, and I sure married the wrong girl. (missionary only). But Scorpio has really opened my eyes to what I missed. You have really opened my eyes as to what might have been. Only 5 stars are allowed but *************. JJ

Fantastic story. He's NOT mega rich. Only 1 female, and it worked beautifully. Great characters and very believable. I loved it.