All Comments on 'A Jealous Mom'

I t was a good start, mom seducing her son, now get them home to make love to each other, Vanessa will get pregnant to Ethan, he will love her forever!

I really enjoyed this and if you were to write more chapters I would certainly read them.

You definitely should continue this story. An exploration of the mom submitting to her son. Excellent work, well done

Definitely keep going. I would enjoy Part 2.

Great story. Begs for a part 2 with him, mom, and even some of the other ladies.

Excellent story, I think you owe it to your readers to add a second chapter.

Amazing story! Please do more

I'd love to see this story continue. Perhaps dad finally understands how good he had it.

I loved it!! Very hot Mom/Son fucking. Especially the "vocally" expressed pleasure by Vanessa during her orgasms.

the story was going great until you had him start spanking her ass, what is it with you jerks that think beating on women is fun for them during sex, you wouldn't think it was fun if they squeezed the shit out of your balls that caused your balls a lot of pain. all you women beaters should have your dick and balls cut off and fed to you.

Loved it, more please. 5 stars!

A very good story! One that I hope you'll continue. Why not make it into a sexy love story... Thank you!

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Really enjoyed one. I can definitely see this turning into a passionate love story. Maybe they move to new place and start a new life together?

Loved it! More please!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Just them two though.. no one else.. dates, vacations, heels ,nylons ,pregnancies.. just living.. you know??

You really need to double check your work before submitting. An editor might help. And you would score higher too.

Otherwise, I enjoyed it.

Excellent story.. perfect buildup.. only negative would be how quickly it wrapped up... perhaps work on prolonging the culmination and what happened afterwards..??

Also, possibly use an editor to proofread and repair the few typos etc...

Otherwise.. 5-star HOTtt

Excellent. But I agree With some of the others here. Double check and get an editor. Otherwise, this needs to be a series. Keep up the good work thanks

I am hoping for the next part, where he tells his Mom "you're the one I've always really wanted".

More please!

THIS......was such a slow burn incestuous lust and fuckin'. LOVE the passionate deep kissing, a must have n any sexual moment! LOVED IT!

Good story. Was hoping he'd at least recognized his mom's voice.

That was so hot I loved the whole seduction.

We need more of these two

A brilliant seduction scene, beautifully described, as were all of the primary characters. Keep writing what happened the following morning when they got up for breakfast and through the weeks that followed.

Yes more would be fun

I'd love to read some more of this story so by all means please continue

First half could almost be removed to improved story - summarized in a few paragraphs. Glad I stuck around until the end.

More, please.

I did enjoy the characters so more could be fun