All Comments on 'A Joke Ch. 02 - Texan's Epilogue'

poisoning the duplicitous cunt, that make him a cuck

and cucks deserve their pain becuase the spineless shit vollenteer for it

That really was a pretty severe ending, with a lot of pain being inflicted on everyone involved. I really felt sorry for Alice, she was just an innocent bystander who got sucked into the maelstrom. But you know, the situation could have turned out worse. I have known people to be killed for lesser offenses than what Roger perpetrated against Jim.

Further to my last comment, on rereading the original two stories and both your follow-ons, yours are better. I really enjoyed them.

I've known one or two of those 'pranksters' who laugh like the Joker in the pretence that its humour, while constantly tormenting someone (me) as if they're being paid to do it. It's like trying to concentrate on doing something while a mosquito keeps buzzing around you. Eventually you lose your temper and go looking for the little bastard with murder in mind. So I understand the need to get that mosquito and start removing wings.

However, I actually liked your afterword best. And still the BTB crowd weren't happy.

Sometimes the vitriol in the comments is almost better than the story - although not here. And if at the end he's no longer married, how is he still a cuck? The way it's overused, I think that word is actually a mating call for the anonymous.

TX, your absence leaves us poorer for it.

nothing more than a willing cuck after all

Man , that's what i like about Texas...bring the hammer...) 5*

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Yep you did it. Tied off all those loose ends with a blow torch. Can't really say anyone recovered from it all. Like you said, you went nuclear on them, and himself. I guess in a way, no one really recovers from a betrayal in a spiritual relationship. Really liked it, well planned and written..

I hope they all three die of sex induced heart attacks at age 90.

I was happy reading the story until the FFM with Flo and Alex. There was nothing in the story that would support the FFM, and I would think that neither Flo nor Alex would have allowed sharing a husband/lover.

Was a good story until that point, and then it dropped like a killer.

Really wierd

Makes this a WIMP story...1 star

Wow, i didn't see that ending coming. Well told. No dead sections...BRAVO, BRAVO!

I loved the iron hard core wrapped in a playful glove. And like you, I like people to end up happily where possible. So I enjoyed the journey. Thank you.

Your a great writer. Loved the finish.

Flo's husband should have nothing to do with any of them mostly Flo, what a loose screw.

RAAC?! After the shit that Flo did?!

Sorry, you lost my vote. 1*

I liked the story. I think that the first chapter was enough. Unlike other readers, I was able to draw my own conclusions. It was, however, funny and over the top. What I liked most were the authors introductory message, and his message at the ending. Yeah! Fuck you Roger. A 4 Star Rating.

The only part that doesn’t make sense, is staying in the house where everything happened. They’re due for a change of scenery.

2mil volts? was that a typo? bc 2mill volts would turn a person to ash let alone holding something that can produce that much volts

tall tales indeed human nature would have had 1 or more end up dead during that torture session, reconciliation lol again human nature would have made that impossible after a torture session. i wonder if they hand cuff each other before they go to sleep to be sure no one kills or tortures the other again

Deserved what they got, especially Roger. Could have given him some more, for fucking up everything with his inane pranks. Shocking that Flo, who insisted she loved her husband, could disrespect him as she did! - but a good ending. 5 stars--- if not more. Loved your closing comments!

Cutting off guy's penis and lopping off his testicles is OK but shocking and branding is not.

Ask any male which he would rather have as punishment!

I'm not sure I go along with you on the "payback" joke but hey they are your characters. Otherwise a well written story.

Being handcuffed and at the mercy of someone else can cause a person to hyperventilate. And being tased is unbelievably painful. I have been stabbed and even grazed by a bullet. They pale in comparison. I do, however, believe that the burning and electric jolts were over the top. But I would not have had any problem with castrating Roger or giving him.a partial penectomy. But that may just be me. But, personally, I think that any man who sets out to break up a marriage deserves to lose his testicles and penis.

- 1 billion *

sometime scary. sometime amusing...always perilous, TK U MLJ LV NV

"I know Dad. I know what I'd do. Biggest god-damned revenge 'joke' on the mother-fucker next door. He's the real fucking problem here. Why the hell are you letting that bastard slide, while making Mom's life a living hell?"

Dumbest line ever written.

The "Friend" owed him nothing. HE invited the snake into their lives, and then allowed his "Wife" to continue, consequence-free.

I used to drive my girlfriend in college around town on a moped... we were cute together.

I liked the ending- I too am a romantic. The comment, "I'm 46. I'm too old to start over- I imagined us together the rest of our lives" is so very true and to the point, and it is why the stories where a husband kicks out his errant middle-aged wife bother me. The threesomes are a nice bonus- you go, guy!

Don't know what I commented before but here it goes. We all agree Roger was a scumbag and he deserved a big chunk of the payback, however, Jim did go too far with the branding. Alice was, well Alice. She should have seen Roger for what he was long before anyone else. IMHO Jim should have begun the divorce proceedings after the etchings incident. He could have cited irreconcilable differences and just told Flo that yes he's an asshole, but he refuses to be either a cuckold or a wimp, and if she wants him to stop the divorce, then no more jokes. That would have made the lesson stick! Other than that there's just not much to say!

WHIte willing male cuckold lives happily ever after after accepting and forgiving.

Both of them. They went down like a two fingers of good of Scotch. 5*s !!

...but still good enough for 4 stars. Oddly, I could care less about Roger. Roger was like so many stupid idiots I know who laugh at their own 'jokes'. They are so stupid they don't see that their 'jokes' aren't funny; they are destructive and humiliating. And their jokes make them losers and people to be shunned. Pathetic scum. So, let Roger slide off into obscurity and yes anonymity.

Roger has sat in the bushes watching for months (from his moped). He won the lottery, had them kidnapped on Thier vacation and now keeps them imprisoned on an island where he cuts a piece off of one of them every week for fun. letting Jim pick which one. What are bff's for.

loved the anonymous comment at the end.

very funny

if you only go half-way, one never reaches the destination or the brick wall. TK U MLJ LV NV

If she is not capable to not hang with Rodger than she is not a good wife. Drop her and leave the hood fast as you can.

Why not get back with Flo? It makes sense. They've been married 23 years and they seem compatible, except when Asshole is thrown into the mix. Alice seems super hot. The three of them work. Great situation for everyone. What's not to like? Full marks from me. Nice job.

Tell you what? The branding and the cutting was a tad over the top in my opinion..... in both the chapters. But I really liked the ending; especially the part where Roger stubs his toe twice a day.

Go fuck yourself, Roger!!!

I did NUT get Vd!

& my grammer is prefect.

~Roger

She's a whore the "friend" is a scumbag and he's a candy ass. They both deserved a bullet

Decent enough chapter though a last payback on Roger was missing, after all he said he was a man of his word, seems like it wasn't the case after all.

Permanently shacking up with both Flo and Alice, though I'm not really a fan of people returning to the ex that betrayed them, could be considered a nice bit of payback come to think of it.

I loved reading it. All parts, including the last few lines.

Really liked the add ons to this story. Part (or most spoof) and part very good alternative, Outstanding author !

"I wasn't laughing at you. It wasn't me! He used me!" – She took the bottle from Roger, didn’t it EVER occur to her that it might be another prank? And she DID laugh at him with the others.

“You're so good at deflecting the straight on attention. He came at you from your blindside." – That may very well be, but Jim BEGGED her repeatedly to stop, and she just HAD to keep it going!

While I lean toward BTB, I'm not opposed to reconciliation when I feel it is deserved, and here I generally feel that it is, especially where it's not a TOTAL reconciliation, Jim actually gets the best of both worlds! In any case, despite Jim's doubts, I DO believe that Flo is sincere, especially when she refuses to accept Jim's excuses for her.

Wow..you REALLY hate roger....a moped....that's harsh dude

Damn dude, I don't know where you get your inspiration, and even though your writing sometimes gets long (like mine) it is very good. Your ending is the best of all I have read. Even though Jim and Flo got back together, it wasn't "Oh I forgive you, now the four of us hold hands and every one sing kum-ba-ya". I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I really liked the BANG ending, and here it comes, BUT I was pleased by the final product. I am a fan of the happy ending whenever it is reasonably possible and this was just barely reasonable.

Keep writing, I enjoy your work.

I don't always like some of your plots but you write well. This was much better than Ch2, thanks.

He untied Alice, then starts to release Flo, How did Roger get free so fast ?

Yea, I just hate that s(d)ob, too wimpy to sign his/her name, or just too damn lazy to sign in. I'll bet they don't even know their own name anymore.

BTW. I really like the way you collect harems; I am a big fan of yours. I expecially like that twisty, kinky mind of yours creating really excited plots. I just can't wait to read what happens next in any of your stories, maybe that's why I have only written 3, oh, ah, well, 1 that the dog-virus didn't eat.

Send me your email and after I copyright it I'll share it with you.

DHL

Enjoyed it, thanks.

I take your point about anonymous comments. It's a valid one. I too skip reading certain comments by certain names. Like that Krosis666 guy. I hate that opinionated, sanctimonious fucker! They're just fucking stories, dude, get off your soapbox!

FUCK YOU ROGER ! ;-)

Sorry - just didn't enjoy this on any level. Not a single decent character in the lot. And I accept that they weren't your characters to start with. But your stories didn't do anything good for them. I find that if you can't enjoy, empathize or even like any of the characters in a story, then there's no way to like the story. Maybe next time.

It isn't about using a real name or a pseudonym - and in some cases, even about just using "anonymous".

You can use any of those choices for your name and STILL be anonymous.

The trick is in "Is the person who's leaving the posts YOU or not...?"

I've known people who even using their real names pretended to be something or someone they weren't. Now, while that's OK on the one hand (if you're just playing), it is also foolish in my book if you're not.

The ONLY way people posting online interact with each other is THROUGH their words. If you want to get to know people but aren't yourself, why bother...?

You either have thoughts and opinions and share them and we get to know YOU - or you lie.

I've said this elsewhere, but yes, you are correct, we are all technically anonymous here, but the difference between the anons and those of us with handles is two-fold:

First, we can have a conversation, an actual exchange of ideas, which is hard to do with no id.

Second, with ids we learn a little bit about each other, learn whose views we value, and, yes, whose views we think are ridiculous and can skip right over!

But I suppose not impossible. Roger's reaction seemed ideal for the kind of lying sack of shit he was...

As epilogues go, this worked pretty well. Nice to have Flo forced even more to face what she'd done and it's cost.

I reckon I can live with them getting back together as long as they either NEVER remarry or it takes her years to prove she'll side with him against others for now on. It would be nice to have seen proof that she eventually respected and trusted him again - not sure we saw that here.

I love your stories, wish you would write more. I also think the anonymous thing is kind of funny. Like my name is zguillotine or something. Anyway, I love your writing and that you are brave enough to post them. I have thus far chicken out at posting mine, though I have like 20 or more (counting individual chapters in series) that I would love to post.

So, I am encouraging you to write more. I think I have never given you less than a 4 and I think most have been 5s. -=zg=-

I think I have read six or seven endings to this story. I prefer the one where he leaves Flo and Roger goes to prison and then when he escapes he kidnaps Flo and their daughter and then gets his head blown off. Good ending. Fuck Flo, the cheating bitch whether in actuality or just pretend, she cheated.

This was certainly a ride. A veritable roller-coaster of emotions.

You did splendid work here, five stars. If for nothing else, than for making me feel something other than disgust with a story that's in the LW category here. Is it strange that I keep rummaging through the gutter in hopes of finding more gems like yours? Ah well, thankfully you have other stories for me to enjoy. Cheers.

You are one of those? Really?

One of those sad people that bitch about 'anonymous' comments. Really? I Love how all of you fail to see the irony in that! Makes me laugh, every time! How can you not see what is painfully obvious?

WE ARE ALL ANONYMOUS! Or is Tx Tall Tales your REAL name? Like countless authors before you, you use a pseudonym. Why? To remain anonymous of course! Changing the name 'anonymous' to some other random, make up name or word doesn't make ANY of us any less anonymous! Duh!

You bemoan people criticising your writing by bitching about anon comments, yet YOU hide your identity behind that same screen? Perhaps you might consider changing your anonymous name from Tx Tall Tales to Tx Hypocrite!

The last story, and this one, you commented about "Ralph". Methinks you mean Roger!

Boy, grumpy tonight, ain't I?

I actually did enjoy both tales, even if the second one was crap in my opinion, so I shouldn't be complaining! But I will anyway, because I enjoy it!

How could you but them back together, Tx? She cried and begged for him to not hurt Roger, yet when Roger was torturing HER husband, she pushed Alice out of the way, because she was so impatient to get her turn! She pleads for the guy she KNEW was trying to humiliate her husband, and she FIGHTS to be next in torturing her husband? And you put them back together?

If you were wondering why people would complain about this story, THAT is why!

Be a man. Stop pandering to sissies, just because they criticize your story. If you are going to destroy a story, and write a completely illogical ending, then don't write in the first place. The last story was fine as it stood, maybe a little over the top, or out there, but it was yours. That is now meaningless, because you couldn't handle a few 'Politically correct' pussies that can't even READ about confrontation, criticising you, so you felt you had to play up to them, just for a quiet life. But you fail to realise, that there will always be someone there to criticize you either way (like me! And yes, I am a huge fan of irony), so don't write follow up tales to appease people, just be you, and leave it at that!

How is this RAAC? It may be reconciliation, but certainly not at all costs!

Re Anon "Disgusting - Puke story. Jim's a wimp". How is he a wimp? Tortured Ralph, got the best sex of his life, got his divorce from his humiliating wife. Has her back on HIS terms, not to mention occasional (maybe not so occasional!) hot threesomes with Alice!

"Except for that damn Roger. He got cancer, testicular. Lost a ball. Picked up three strains of VD from a transvestite hooker......" And if all that wasn't bad enough, the poor bastard ended up in Texas.

BUT, I think you tale was GREAT! Many of us "anon's" stay anon to avoid pissing contests. Hope you understand.

Saying it's a Texan ending is an insult to Texas.

In Texas it's an eye for an eye ,you should named it RAAC style,then we would have some idea. Anything like a Texan style they would go to jail and rightfully so. If nothing else for unlawful confinement.

most .

In truth, this is beyond childishness. If Jim only had the balls to stand up to Roger and Flo long before it got so out of hand; this could have nipped in the bud. When Jim didn't cold-cock Roger over the lipstick stunt, I had zero respect for him. The only thing of value to this story, was it is a good example of the devious methods of evil people. They are the opposite straight forward earnest good folk, and you did an outstanding job of explaining it. If good men could just learn the difference jealousy and zealousness; they would be much more proactive at protecting their marriage, and you'll see the evil fuckers back off as fast as they can because their goals and methods can't stand the light of day.

Puke story. Jim's a wimp; no guts for true payback. And, author, doubt if you read comments but you are no better.

"Fuck you Roger"? Brilliant, just brilliant.

Well we agree on Roger anyway.

Aren't Texan the most take no prisoners in the country?

Adding this on to the Texan's Ending brought it all together quite well.

I liked it better the second time I read it. I will say that I liked the ending (forget who wrote it) where Roger got jail time and ended up shooting himself after he escaped and then knew he had to go back. That ended him! Actually, this ending of yours was too good for Flo, IMO. Thank you for writing.

Thank you for the interesting read and for getting the grammar managed to where it is easy to read as well.

Revenge is such sweet torment to the soul. We all seem to have a love/hate relationship with it. On the one hand, we feel Flo and Roger deserved it and on the other hand we sense Jim went to far.

You ended the story in the way you wanted to and that is your privilege as the author.

Regards,

-Pultoy

Holy shit you should get into comedy 10/10 just for the after comment.

And 10/10 for the story I like a happy ending when everyone ends up happy :) thanks for the great read mate

But where was his wife when Roger was hitting him from behind and tying him to the chair, and branding him? WTF! Even if I had done that to Roger, I wouldn't have anything to do with her after she let that happen to me! Also, after I got free, there would have been a beating! Old Roger would be pulp!

Fuck you Roger.

With the exception of the threesome, I found this ending to be a good finish for the direction that this author took with this story. I told myself I wasn't going to read this chapter, but morbid curiosity won. I'm glad that I did. I gave a 1 star to the last chapter because of the over the top revenge, but this chapter gets 4.

good 1....bill

It was a good story but unfinished....just upload it again. A good story that is incomplete is worse than a fucked up story.

babble drivel worthless non sense acting.

typical worthless ttt tales

You are a fine writer and I enjoy your stories very much.

This one though was not enjoyable, everything was a bit too extreme.

betrayed saying "fuck you Roger" when everyone except him knows he is the "roger" - fucking brilliant man, delicious irony.

Probable I have with the tale (though well written) is that the thought that Jim became part of the problem in a little like blaming the paper for catching on fire when a flame is held to it. Blame the flame; blame Flo and Roger. As for forgiveness, forget it. Roger should of walked away and been done with her.

As always love your work...Write faster!

Just to piss off the guy who gave it a two. Petty revenge? Isn't it all.

I liked this ending better.

As to the guy who says unbelievable. I dunno. Men are romantics. They have faith that love will conquer all. Sometimes it doesn't And it takes some men a long time to wake up. A clever woman can string things along for decades. Not good enough to make things work. Not bad enough to call it quits. How do I know? Well I was personally stupid for 40 years. "Maybe this time she will see the light" especially after hearing from her "If I knew it would be this good I'd do it all the time." And it was bliss. For a while. Fooled me. All she needed to do was give me a taste (every few years) when it looked to her like it was crumbling. Besides. I couldn't do it to the kids. Until they were on their own.

Why take it to that point the original was much better and realistic.

Lots of twists and turns. The end sums it up. Fuck you Roger. Fuck everybody that looks like like you. Fuck your mother and your father. Also, eat shit and die.

HA HA HA

The above applies to author only.

He created characters to his liking.

Flo should have been brain dead to behave like she did. Hubby was way too tolerant beyond belief. The only one believable was this lowlife Roger.

Garbled ending to all at the end to make the story crap

That's right, I was deciding which one of your stories to read first, and hit the stars by accident. This story is back to more of your style, so lets pretend I gave you four stars. Welcome back, Buddy.

No need for a story. 5 stars for Rogers ending! Keep up the great story writing!

Epilogues are sometimes very necessary and only conscientious good writers provide them. Your story needed it and it worked. I like happy endings and this one was lukewarm but nevertheless good. Roger couldn't get enough snake venom in my humble opinion. Flo and her hubby should've moved to a totally new start with renewed marriage vows maybe a winning lottery ticket or a major unexpected inheritance. Alice was nice and was the innocent bystander and her sharing the bed with Flo and hubby was not the outcome I was looking toward. The story was thoughtful well-written and well developed. There are philosophical differences in opinion but it is in fact your story nit mine. I like your writing style and your thorough descriptions. Thanks for a nice ending

Of all the stories I've read on this site... This one made me laugh the hardest. LOVE the comments on Roger... Stubbed his toe twice a day! ROFLMAO.

Appreciate the follow up to your story.

I loved this ending (I love happy endings). Rock on!!!

Story-telling masterpiece.

I've been thinking about your writing and why I look forward to it so much. I think it comes down to this. You have a recurring theme of "ordinary people in extraordinary circumstances leading to pleasures that surpass the ordinary."

This series ends up fitting into that theme, although it took the epilogue to do so. Those complaining about the ending should recognize that this is your brand. Similarly, opening a bottle of Coke won't lead lead to a root beer float. The reason that we, your fans, enjoy your work is that our expectations are always met and often exceeded.

The TTT brand is a good one. The best, in my opinion. Write what you write and I will enjoy it. Thank you for your artistry.

Both the revenge chapter and this epilogue masterfully bridged fantasy and reality for me. Loved it.

fantasy-style revenge in previous chapter with a gritty realistic feel.. the epilogue extends this theme with a fantasy-style resolution with amazing, realistic emotional turmoil. Rhenquist-style real characters while pushing the plot to the edge of reality - and just over it... really well done.

I'll stop now before I get more redundantly effusive in my praise.. oh wait, too late.

SMM

I have not read every story in the Literotica library; but I'm working on it. This, in my opinion, is the best series of stories I've ever read!! The original ending of Agena's "A Joke" was lame. Tx Tall Tales nailed it...home run...gold medal...grand prize winner!!

My first thought when he/she indicated it was going to be dark...very dark; my thinking was Jim would torture Roger and cut off his dick in front of the women. Then knowing the legal shit he would be in for he would take the gun (a real one) and blow his head off leaving grey matter splattered all over Roger's face. That would certainly leave a lasting impression forever in the minds of the other three jokesters. (now that's DARK) However, I must say that I liked it much better the way TTT's decided to end it with the happy threesome and the story of Rogers demise. I Loved It !!!

Glad you are OK with MY comments

But Roger ................... well fuck him.

Regards

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