All Comments on 'A Joke Ch. 02 - Texan's Epilogue'

Well written and truly disturbing at the same time!

A tale of excess that lead to Exs

5* all the way. Well written.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣yes fuck you Roger!

I find it funny that people complain that a sight about fantasy sex stories are not real enough. Anyway I enjoyed it but I also laughed at BANG! I guess I'm just a weirdo.

Yeah, fuck you, Roger!

GREAT story!!!!! Really Texas flavour in it ;) Well done!!!

5 stars, of course!

I agree, fuck Roger.

Lmao this author really seemed like he held a personal grudge on him. He got the short end of the stick. Mc came out stealing his wife and got his wife back. He did Roger dirty but this was all about doing him dirty so can't complain

Good story! But Roger should stub his toe that has a hang nail......there more painful.

Sorry, whole lot about nothing. Too much over the top. No self respecting man would put up with that he did. Then to take her back? Waste of time reading this. LM

4 Stars as I thought everyone was guilty except for the husband . I also thought he went over board on the revenge part . I would have divorced her ass and moved on down the road . Life is way to short to have a wife who always takes her lovers side.

One last word I failed to write prior to posting: my view of liking this with Saddletramp's work is a stretch, to say the least, downgrading his work- more to my thinking. Saddletramp's burning had reason, thought, & logical purpose. The treatment here to an extent might've been, but for the most part, was like burning down the house to treat an insect family just to build it back up & invite the insects to return. My opinion. Bob

From a story where the husband waits too long to confront his wife & neighbors about their hurtful (among a vast of other things) practical joking to him accepting her back after he's hospitalized overnight from that & one more time at a BBQ, hubby then goes overboard in his "joking" payback.

To the friend that not only doesn't stop but increases the humiliation, he should've just washed his hands of the friendship. Filed, as suggested he does, charges against the neighbor for at least unlawful restraint. To the wife who kept apologizing & continuing, including what sounded very much as adultery, she's served with the divorce papers, as well as being an accessory to the neighbor's restraining him.

As the result, this last part mostly wouldn't have been written (which I'd not shed any tears) or written much differently. The neighbor's payback as described wouldn't have been done. Most puzzling, the spineless wimp of a husband not only takes his wife back, but befriends the asshole neighbor. And for that, & this 2 part story, I give a tremendous 1 star. Sorry I took the time to read it. Most times, cutting people out of your life, & here serving them with jail time, then moving on is the best punishment Bob

Pleased to see that you back pedalled on your anon bashing at the end of the story. We're not all trolls, you know. I enjoyed your work immensely and heartily approved of the happy ending.

The commenter who noted these sequels were from the archives of Saddletramp got it exactly right. Way, WAY over the opt, but so very humorous and perhaps a bit poignant. But I can't believe the two protagonists would get back together after all that. I don't buy it that someone like the wife Flo who did that could ever reform sufficiently to restore trusted intimacy. Spousal disrespect was somehow in her emotional DNA. The husband would have been better off to seek therapy than move back in with such a twisted (ex)wife. Speaking of confused!

And the Moped you rode in on, Roger! (umpteenth reading)

From the archives of Saddletramp , but in spades. Just like the Tramp's stories "over the top but me cheering all the way.

a little bit nutty

That PS was amazing.

Wow. What an absurd couppemof chapters. Absolutely crazy. Good writer but just nuts. 23 years of marriage comes to a torture fen in thr basement. No idea why Flo would burn her husband. After 23 years of marriage? Of course see the MC wrnt psycho. Literally a psychotic break. Nasty. Roger was utter filth. Felt bad for Alice. This author like ffm threesomes.

What a weird and twisted group.

Ridiculous, with a capital R. Ranting also starts with an R. At the lemonade joke, I would have false laughter, walking over as if all was OK. I would have walked up to Roger and cold cocked him with everything I had. He would have gone down. Then my laughter would have been genuine.

To the author. I liked this. Thank you for your version. It worked for me. To the commenters. You are all entitled to like or not like this and any other story. Some of you obviously never had your mum impart a great piece of wisdom to you which is " If you can't say something nice then say nothing at all" Try thinking about that before typing 😉

Dumbass story. Once you go this far there is only way to go..... Whoever/however took Jim down and then tortured him, I expected his next words to be. "Nope this is it Roger is gonna kill me with your help. I won't be around to see if you three get away with it." When they protest, he says, 'It's simple. I die or he does, now. Go ahead, you've taken it this far ." And they do..

That shows you how far you wrote yourself into a corner. This ending was just stupid.

You’re too good a writer for such a stupid ending. He’s going to live with her after everything she did? And she did it repeatedly, knowingly. There wouldn’t have been any way he would have taken her back!! Disappointing…

[12.05.23]

This duology is top tier!

11/10!!!!!

I liked it! Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Well written but a little too much over the top for me. Especially the ending. Sounds nice but way past reality. If you can’t trust the person you love then it’s not really love. Oh well. LM

Should have killed roger.Never was a fan for keeping the wife stealer alive

I liked it apart from going into the cellar, all that went on in there was just stupid stuff to fill the page that you didn’t need,

Roger is indeed an asshole. Felt sorry for Alice especially. But also for Jim and Flo. Flo clearly disrespected her husband, thinking it was fun and a joke but bring led down Roger's primrose path of seduction. Jim certainly retaliated over the top. Showing his desire to destroy both marriages. Guess it was the only way for Flo to know the pain she caused and to see herself as player a major role on the "cuckold" torture of her loving husband. After their last joke, he came to hate her, at least sometimes. Sad they could never fully reconcile. To.outside appearances it seemed they did, but he always had the scars and she always was reminded of her painful betrayal and his outsized retribution. Pretty ghastly payback despite much of it being a deception or recoverable (except the head scarring, yikes!). They almost certainly needed therapy both personal and joint counseling. They both really fucked up though she certainly lit the match. Roger is an asshole of.massive proportions. Glad Alice escaped him. Still confused why a wife of 23 years woukd cross that final line for a laugh. Huge disrespect. But yeah instead of therapy and full reconciliation, we get a semi-reconciliation and a bunch of threesomea with Alice. Odd ending.

Don’t know why, but I liked it at the end. Crazy tale.

I would seriously love to sit down with you and have a couple of drinks. Hell, make that a week long conversation, one sitting would be insufficient to delve into your psyche. I am truly awed, lol.

I loathe the jokesters of this world. Five stars.

I like happy endings after Purgatory. This filled the bill.

Crazy over the top story. Just Bizarro world. And yet somehow it works. I disagree that Flo learned nothing. The time in the basement changed her a great deal. Even she and Alice made up. She experienced great loss. After seeing what Roger had been doing to use her and come at her "blindside", she had no use for him whatsoever. I think the RAAC while twisted was somehow believable and besides they will never remarry. They are lovers but there is not enough trust to merit a formal marriage though I wager Flo would like nothing more for it to happen. It was interesting to see the MC heal over time. Not completely. Trust not restored. But thr part of him that loved his wife grew enough to move back in. Roger was a pile of shit. Alice got really hurt. Thr fact that she keeps coming over to spend time with Jim and Flo means she is not whole again after all of this.

Damm RAAC.

Flo didn't learn anything. Didn't defend her husband when Roger knocked him out and tied him up after the women were released. Still proclaimed her innocence "we didn't do anything". Only reason she changed was Roger wasn't around anymore.

Jim said his love was dead and had been dead for several hate filled months. How the heck could he do 180°?

I like a happy ending too

I loved this ending. Gave it a “5”. The best part, was him not re- marrying the slut. When her snatch dries up, he can then bring a “ younger model” into bed, since ex wifey has already given her approval to threesomes. If she doesn’t like it, don’t let the door hit your ass, on the way out. That’s the thing most women who cheat, don’t understand. Unlike what Literotica would have you believe, a woman peaks on her attractiveness around 20. Since a lot of these women in these stories become empty nesters before cheating, that would make them mid 40’s. Young enough to find a dick, but not hot enough to warrent a ring. And about 8-10 years away, from being in the bargain bin, low shelf life isle at Walmart!

Like this version.

You satisfied most everyone. Except, the righteous few. RESPECT!

These creatures had to be dissolved alive in acid. Everyone.

That wasn’t an epilogue. That was chapter 3

YOU TOTALLY FUCKED THIS PART UP WITH THE SKANKS FLO, ALICE TEAMING WITH ROGER!!

I love mopeds

5 stars. You have a weird sense of humor. BUT---I enjoyed the story(s).

Flo was a lot worse than Roger it was sickening she helped torture him for months and then finally carried it to a climax. It's such a disgusting feeling seeing him get back with his abuser.

I’ve read all the sequels. Just read this one again and I must say, I’ve enjoyed more the second time. That’s the hallmark of a great writer. And TTT is right about resiliency. Our minds are hard wired to forgive...eventually. Time is always the enemy (and friend) in reconciliation. Great writing and you captured the entire gambit of emotions.

Loved it. Wasn't 5 on the ending version, but definitely a 5 on the epilogue

Liked it but didn't love it. Too much pain

Love the author's postscript! Great play on "Anonymous". This Anonymous appreciates the wit in this work. Thank you Tex :}

OMG these people are all terrible. Clinically insane perhaps. Not a good ending not a good aftermath either.

Very good aftermath. I like it. I feel both parts are very real.

Good description of the emotions also.

It's been what...3-4 years since you last wrote a story. I naturally do not know why you stopped, however I'd love to hear your thought on how you "outline" the direction of your stories. I love your style and even going over the top a bit woth these 4 chapters. BTRH

Just had to have a happy ever after ending didn't ya... Ah well it works for your friendly neighborhood Servant; after all you preceded it with one of the most off the wall BTB's EVER! So I will go with the husband is an idiot... who lets his love and loneliness trump his common sense. Yes the wife is an utter sociopathic narcissistic slut who by her demonstrated actions throughout BOTH episodes demonstrates one iota of the unconditional love necessary to have a viable safe place called home which is the core of a true marriage. Instead she demonstrates her sociopathic selfishness over and over again and is in pornea. Pornea is the greek word losely translated as lust...which really means to use another as a thing/object to satisfy your impulsive lust of the moment., Unconditional love is based on the rational decision to love regardless of the circumstances...in which you place the partner's needs before yours. Pornea is utterly selfish and is the acting out of emotional momentary impulses, It is an addiction, and like an addiction the monkey on the back grows into the gorilla as you continually feed it., Since it is a momentary gratification of emotional impulse a sociopath like the wife is always searching for a bigger cock, better sexual expertise, more humiliation of the previous partner.

The wife demonstrates that she is in pornea through her continued disrespect of the husband throughout the both episodes.... Not once in these tales does she ever show unconditional love, but instead shows her utter contempt for her husband and marriage in the basement, and even at the happy ever after ending. As a sociopath she will always look for a higher sexual hit...and that base motivation can only be contained through clearly established outward boundaries the crossing of which will result in very painful punishment. She cannot discipline herself by definition. Thus the husband becomes the warden of the prison camp that the marriage transforms into, It will continue only until he realizes the utter hopelessness of continuing as she can and will act out additional betrayals when new triggering circumstances occur in the future.

And that my friends is Servant's definition of HELL on Earth... Still an outstanding over the top tale and I love over the top tales by a really exceptional writer.... 5 stars!!

This was written 8 years ago, and no new stories for a very long time. This was a great story, please write again. 5 stars

Story was fun and I really can't believe how well you got the anons off to a tee in the end notes.

*****

second time around for here I like it as much as I did the first time solid five

Yes, you are a serious good writer. Enjoyed this. Really great effort

Woah. I think I’m going to have to read everything else you’ve done because that was some serious quality writing.

Fuck your ending. Everybody gets computer viruses from shitty porn and male enhancement emails. especially when he was old and owned by the same person since they were a puppy, killing off a dog is never funny. It's not a moped, its a vintage Punch Maxi. And fuck Krystal, that bitch/dude never said nothing.

Reading this story (all parts of it) made me shit, puke, howl at the moon and then curse god just before I went blind and died. It is so perverse and fucked up that it almost seems like real life. Personally, should the situation have happened to me, I probably would have just curled up in the fetal position and cried. Then in a few minutes after I got over it all I would have hefted up my huge nuts and with my steel hard 13" dick I would have fucked Roger, both wife's and then finished off in the tailpipe of my 1967 Vincint Shadow. As I walked away from the burning home (with all of the other involved people still alive inside) I would hop in my duallie Dodge truck and take off with my trailered 2006 highly modified Boss Mustang and head off cross country leaving a trail of crying bow legged waitresses behind.

Just saying......

I know Roger was a bad guy but making him drive a moped, thats dark, very dark. Good follow-up to a follow-up, not a happy ending exactly but not a dark bleak ending.

Yea! Fuck you Roger!

That was an actually well-told aftermath, quite toned down, especially considering the insanity of the previous part. How he ends up with his mini-harem is a stretch, but I'll take it. Love the postscript about Roger, perfect way to end.

This part isn't half bad.

My only real critique of your two stories is the same as the rest of Lit authors and people in general who attempt or write about revenge. You all simply don't have the concept of what Revenge truly is. In a way, that's a good thing.

In order to really pull off an act of revenge, it needs to be total and final. Most people don't have the ability to do it or even write about it. They usually either back off a bit or think that killing a bad person is Revenge. They also do it sneaky so the person doesn't even realize who performed the Revenge or they think they just had some bad luck.

Like I said above, Revenge should be total and final. It should also punish the person for a very long time if not the rest of their lives. The person should also know you did it but can't get back at you or have any solid evidence to give to the Police. If you kill someone in the name of Revenge it isn't really Revenge because they can't suffer. If you feel the situation calls for a death you leave them alive and instead, kill all of their family members.

You also don't cut a cheating wife a break because they were a good wife for X Amount of years or the mother of your children., You grab your kids and all the money and run.

Revenge should NEVER BE proportional, that's called payback. All forms of revenge should decimate that persons entire existence.

Everything that you'd expect from a cowboy...

I read page one and skipped the rest.

Excellent ending! I think Flo finally got it and Alice was really in love with Jim but knew she couldn't compete with Flo over time. I had an asshole "friend" like Roger once and amazingly his name was Roger. My wife and I almost had a relationship that ended like Jim's did with a second woman but I could not do it to my wife. We loved each other too much to share and it would not have been fair to our friend!

Fuvk you Roger

@someoneother

Roger goes to the police

Did you forget that Roger handcuffed Jim first, in his basement leaving his wrists all cut up.

You know this was payback don't you.

@Harryin VA

WHY do authors KEEP doing a re-write of this God dman awful story!?!

STOP THE GOD DAMN MADNESS...

Why would anyone do anything just because you said so, or didn't like. You sound like you think you are some sort of a God.

Well guess what....you are not!

@Anonymous10 days ago

Still waiting.

Write your own story instead of whining like a little bitch about stories from a really good author.

Are you Roger?

Stupid to let Roger carve up Jim's head. I thought Jim was gonna wake up to Roger fucking Flo but thrilled it wasn't to be. Glad to see Jim and Flo together again.

Wins the gold star for best headline.

Oh, holy cuckolding shit....

Perfect. No need to say anything else about this travesty of a story.

For a proper conclusion to "The Joke". This was another "meh". Every feeble attempt at finishing this story by numerous authors are in themselves a "Joke". In not one sequel I have read, has anyone taken it to it's only logical conclusion. It Must end in a divorce. It's the only outcome possible after all the countless humiliations heaped upon the husband by his hateful wife, culminating in chaining her own husband to a pipe while she fucked the neighbor. Even if she didn't actually fuck him, she got naked for him, and let him make her cum. Every time she helped her neighbor humiliate her husband, that was itself cheating.

Hell, even in this one, she begs and pleads with her husband to not hurt the dick head neighbor, but when he is tied up, she can't wait to again help her neighbor torture her husband.

This story was fucked up originally, and nothing has ever improved it's disposition.

An ending of epic scale! Alice got to stay (yay, I liked Alice), Roger lost a ball, and I’m still laughing!

After all that jimmy was a WIMP after all.

Did you have to kill the dog!?

It was sailing along just fine until the end. Ending drops it to *4 for threesome.

Seriously?? A moped???

Jim's hatred knows no bounds.

Loved the story and the ending.

Thanks

They already threw it away, once. Now they are drifting back to it, like a rudderless boat being washed back to its home port. Its possible.

But I never understood Flo, how she started with Roger. I mean, maybe a joke or two, innocent. But the humiliation and disrespect, continually, chronically? And so late in their marriage, after she knew what a great husband, father, lover he had been, and still was. Was it Martian Scorn Ray? It was necessary to drive the plot, but its origins never made sense, not in a way that would lead to eventual reconciliation. Just the opposite. Whatever caused he to drift out of respect and compassion for her husband would be expected to continue and increase over time. Why not? But why would she? That's what makes the plot weak. Her contempt for her husband never made any sense.

And neither does their reconnection, especially including Alice. Still it was an interesting read.

Thanks for the effort.

That , my friend , was funny ! What a spectacular epilogue ! Hilarious and warm and cuddly and soft and downy-like ! I loved it ! Do you copy , over ? Roger Wilco over and out !

I'm surprised after all this he basically moved sideways then back again lol.

But he was married to flo for more than 23years and I'm sorry but that is a lot of years to simply move on, I'm also happy that Alice was with him for a while as well, and when he got back with flo too.

Glad you kept them unmarried, everything is going great so why change it, keep it simple and you did, awesome story

He should get remarried, and keep Alice too. That would get him 5 stars. The Bear pretty much approves.

The BEAR

Revenge carries on way past the first time

Everyone carries on, even though the husband actually committed serious crimes against Roger, I appreciate he wanted a nuclear revenge, then why not go all the way and kill him, I'm sure the author would have found a way for that to go unpunished too, poor overall

The story is stupid. All Roger has to do is go to the police and the vindictive asshole is going to be convicted of false imprisonment and battery, which should be good for several years in jail.

I like it! The A-hole Roger got what he deserved and Alice, Flo and Jim were able to reconnect more intimately. The thought of Flo and Jim remarrying would ruin the three relationship.

I really liked this ending. By far the best of the 'Joke' alternates. It somehow even goes well with your previous chapter. Oddly, the part that really hit me was the bit where he's with Alice, talking about it not working out, she asks when he'll leave etc etc.

That bit sounds so realistic. Damn, in my life I've had that conversation. Damn near word for word.

And I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Really good story.

5* for your closing comments. A fucking moped?

Your ending reads a lot worse by being seperate from this.

Roger had a fall and landed on pointed object and pinned one of his testicles and penis together managed to save part of penis and the other testicle

Nice touch! The A-hole got what he deserved and Alice, Flo and Jim were able to reconnect.

Glad Roger got screwed over. Still think the wife is a whore, even if she was joking...

and yet another broken promise from the whore

she promised she would wait forever for the smallest hope he would take her back, but her going out and fucking other guys doesnt sound like waiting forever

Maybe the violence was a bit much but she definitely learned her lesson. I think after 20 odd years of marriage they could have reconciled earlier as she never had sex with the joker. However alls well that ends well. 5 stars from me.

I liked it better stopping after your first chapter. This didn't really add anything to the story.

Roger's dog, I'm in Texas and we just took in a second rescue dog, one more wouldn't have hurt a bit. Are you sure that Roger's comments are Anonymous? Sounds like timriv to me. I think all three of your joke stories are much better than the original, hopefully way too over the top but then again as you explained that was the point. Don't know where you've gone but you are certainly missed, here and in newfi land. Signed: BTW

I have been married and divorced three times. I do not remember the last time I enjoyed sex with any of them. I would give years off of my life to have had "one last time for old times sake." Excellent follow-up story.

I honestly don't get it. What is up with all these comments about 'cucks'? All the "they deserve the pain because they do it willingly" and similar crap?

I am one of those people who was really shocked and appalled at all those stories about men (and very seldomly women) who get pulled/threatened/beaten into a relationship where they are forced to watch other people have the questionable 'honor' of fucking their sleazy, scheming, conniving spouse. It was actually kind of a fixation for a while, and still is to an extend. But I think I understand it now. You see, instead of leaving hurtful comments here, I did a bit of research. A lot of it, actually.

I started looking into real life accounts of cheating, and only very seldomly is it about cuckoldry. There are some real good podcasts out there, and even real taped (anonymized) couples counseling sessions that can teach you a lot, if you have the desire and the mental and emotional capacity for it. Most of the time it seems to be:

A) People who are too immature, or have too little integrity, to end their existing relationship before starting another. Those people are not willing to come back, crawling and begging, to their (no longer) significant other, because to them the partnership has long ended. They just 'forgot' to tell the other half about it. They are commonly not at all sorry about what they have done. Commonly, they feel justified, but embarrassed about being caught, some a little scared about possible social consequences. Or

B) People who want new temporary, exiting experiences. It seems logical that some of the B) cases drift into A) cases over time. One thing I have found interesting is how differently these B) cases are often worded, depending on the gender of the cheater. If the cheater is a man, he is an animal, a sleazy prick trying to get his rocks off where he shouldn't, and he often doesn't have a lot to say about it other than that he is sorry. When pressed, these men may admit that they weren't felling fulfilled in their relationship when it comes to intimacy and sex. If it is a woman she was often "exploring her womanhood" or "on a journey, discovering herself". Many times she isn't really sad about what she did, but sorry about how it affect her partner.

Now, I am not saying that this is true in all cases, or even in most cases, but there is a clear tendency. I think it has to do with the extremely uneven sexual power distribution between the genders. Women often simply have so much more sexual power than men, so that if the man cheats, he plays the submissive, apologetic role, and she plays the dominant, offended role, holding the power to forgive or not. If the woman cheats, he plays the submissive, aggrieved role, while she plays the dominant role of the comforting partner, holding the power to "rebuild his manhood" or not. In the B) cases, anyway.

I think the root of this power discrepancy lays with the natural desire to procreate and the biological fact that, when a couple has a child, there is absolutely no possibility for doubt about who the mother is. The same cannot be said for the father. My feeling is that this is where all the masculine angst stems from.

So what does all this have to do with willing cuckolds? A lot, I think.

From my research, it seems that there are 2 categories of willing 'cuckolds':

C) The simplest to grasp (for me at least) is a person who is scared of getting too close to a partner. A very effective medicine is to have your partner have other partners. Some of these people coin themselves polyamorist, but not all. Some are strictly monogamist and still ask their partners to date and/or have sexual relations with other people, for strictly non-sexual reasons. Boy, it must be a pain to walk in those shoes.

D) The other type of willing cuckold is the only one I think of as "true" cuckolds, in that they have an actual cuckoldry sex fetish. I see this a a form of BDSM, where the cuckold gets off on being submissive to their partner's sexual control. I believe that, exactly because of the sexual power discrepancy between men and women, more men than women are attracted to this type of submissiveness, or less commonly, this type of lifestyle. In the same way, there is a physical power discrepancy between genders, hence why more women than men are attracted to the submissive role in a sex scenario where that plays a role, such as rape(like) fantasies. Anyway, the ultimate act of submission (and therefore joy) for the true cuckold, is (or may be) if their dominant partner chooses to get pregnant by someone else, while the submissive has to do all the real fatherly work.

So I think I actually finally understand. This is not a case of "they deserve the pain because they did it willingly", but rather "they deserve the pain because it fulfills and pleasures them in a way that is hard for the rest of us to understand". Exactly like with people who find pleasure and fulfillment in being brutally whipped. Or god damn feet (why the fuck is it always feet and never elbows??). This is not about cheating at all, but about a Dom/sub relationship, and if some people choose to live like that, then that is totally fine - WITH CONSENT! Without consent, it isn't any better than any other kind of gross sexual abuse. Exactly like it is fine and dandy to get off on fantasies about rape, but disgusting and crazy to rape someone for real. I hope (and believe) that the number of people who act out these fantasies of abuse on an unwilling victim, is as little a blimp in the statistics as those who wrongfully act out their fantasies of physical dominance.

In the same way people feel justified in wanting to take away the physical dominance of a physical abuser, by either breaking their limbs, cutting off their genitals, or even murdering them, people should feel equally justified in wanting to take the sexual abuser's sexual appeal and/or ability away. Luckily most of us aren't savages, so instead of murdering rapists, we instead have society put them in prison for extended periods of time, and limit their contact with victims as much as possible. Perhaps it is time to consider doing the same with people who use sexual power to abuse others. And perhaps also do some preventive measures, such as mandatory paternity tests? Seems logical to me, at least.

In fact, I now strongly believe that it should be punishable by law to break a marriage contract, and it is deeply uncivilized that society refuses to handle such crimes. It might just save a few lives if people weren't left to deal with it themselves.

As this excellent author points out in another story, death is commonly the only exit clause in such contracts, which seems, mildly put, irresponsible. Where else in life do people get to agree to contracts and suffer no consequence for breaking them? That's right: In their wildest dreams.

Damn... Sexuality is tricky fucking... Sorry, fucking tricky!