by _Lynn_
This is a great story! I have really enjoyed it. I would like to see a sequel about the daughters. The scene with rodman is hilarious, I still have the giggles. Well Done!
I was totally captivated by this story...it was tender, passionate, uplifting and a joy to read. Character development, dialogue, plot and scenes were first rate. The Dennis Rodman walk-on was a hoot. Well done, Lynn, well done.
I do believe that this was the best story you have ever written. You should be very proud of it.
High regards
DG Hear
Not only is this your best, but one of the best stories ever. The passion and realizm just kept coming. and the perfect ending. How will you top this one
This was an incredible story of love. Defintely a work of art. Extremely well done.
What an amazing ending to a wonderful heartfelt journey full of passion and intrigue. It's sad to see the story ended so soon, I could even see an epilogue of sorts being a good ide to give your fans just another taste of their favorite characters.
Thanks for a super story. It makes such a change on this site to read such a story of love and happiness
It reads like a fairy tale - beautiful woman with a character of gold, a rich, successful and good looking man - what is there not to like.
Maybe a little too sweet but who's complaining.
If anything, I missed a few complications - an ex, for example, - maybe an earlier suitor (to either one) - the story went almost too smoothly.
NOT a complaint - after all, I'm just an old romantic myself.
GREAT WORK - PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!!!!
Your tale was poignant and moving, and I too want to thank you here for writing it. Your wording of their passionate lovemaking was absolutely hot!
your story is mind boggling ..it is to some extent similar to mine.like i met my boyfriend thru a site but v r yet to meet.i hope my story too goes the way like your story.you are an awesome writer GOD bless you