A King's Legacy Ch. 11

I've enjoyed this very much. Editing is needed. For instance, you use the word contempt when you clearly mean content. Please continue.

Dislike? I’m truly shocked. They must be trolls, because this is a fabulously inventive story. I’m enjoying it very much. (Just catching up — I’ve blown through this in a little over a day.)

I agree with AZslyder - this is YOUR story and you are creating a wonderful world from your imagination. Minor errors, typos, etc do not detract from the story arc you are creating. Post your story as you wish and we can choose to read or not. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.

As a long-time, avid reader of many genres on Lit and other platforms, I would offer a piece of advice to counter the negativity you may receive. Not everyone will like your stories, but write them for yourself. If you have a storyline in your mind already, don't re-write it for critics - finish the story and use them as inspiration for something else. Or pause now and start a new project then come back to this when you're feeling it again. Many series authors have multiple storylines active at once, keeping different creativity streams alive. Don't throw it away if you feel it. 5* by the way, I happen to enjoy the creativity. Slyder

I really received a lot of dislike for this chapter across the board, so i think im going to step away from it for a few days to consider a rewrite or a different direction. Im pausing where i am in chapter 12 until i figure it out, if there's any change at all. Should have something updated by then.