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All Comments on 'A Knight and her Unruly Slave'

by AlexBanks

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome, some really nice material here

This story has quite a bit of promise to it, i look forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Promising story. That said, please get an editor. Constantly changing from past to present tense is quite distracting.

SmutolSmutolabout 7 years ago
painfully short

No character development, no story, no build up, no fun.

2/5

DarkMatter23DarkMatter23about 7 years ago
Who knew

Ahhhhhhh . . . strong independent women and the funny guy . . . my kind of story

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