All Comments on 'A Knock On My Door'

I truly liked this story so I was shocked when I looked back and didn't see an H next to it. Even more shocked to see no comments at the end.

Characters and story worked well, and although the actual climax wasn't told it worked well the way you wrote it. Good job

Really liked it good job!!

very very very well written. Keep it up!

A very nice story with humor thrown in. Well done. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very well done and made me wish I had a sister.

non sense bable

Enjoyed this story very much. The whole thing is funny.

Yep, the guy lost again!

Enjoyed this story very much. The whole thing is funny.

Yep, the guy lost again!

Of course she won; they always win, bless their little pea-pickin' hearts.

It was very disjointed and repetitious. Very little sex.

I enjoyed the funny and interesting story

I read this one after your second submission. This one was much better right up until the end.

Was he drugged, or what? Again, a high school boy would never miss the body next to him in the middle of the night -- at least not when he returned to bed. And he sure as hell wouldn't miss it when "something soft and warm" draped over him, nor what it was.

You seem to approach the line of good writing and then shy away from it.

This shows the difference between 'porn' and 'erotica'. The fact that there is very little sex isn't the problem. It's the point. Well done, and keep up the excellent work.

The Libertine.

The difference between eroticia and porn is how graphic it is. This is erotica. It didnt seem to be meant to just get you off. But rather as a story. Keep going.

Absolutely delightful.

I do think the ending was weak and unrealistic; but the rest of the story was so nice and loving that I had to give you a 5 anyway. I hope you consider re-writing it for a stronger (not necessarily pornier) ending.

RE:"A KNOCK ON MY DOOR"your story was very good butyou should have continued with chapter two and let us know if the parents found out they slept together and if they continued to fuck what happened when she went to college and after it's not nice to leave us hanging

Erotica for sure!

I read this in hopes there would be some nice sex at the end but nope so I read all that for no reason and now I'm sad.

boring. lame. and i cant believe i wasted my time.

YOU ASSHOLE, NOT EVEN THE BALLS TO LEAVE YOUR NAME. WRITE SOMETHING AND WE WILL JUDGE YOU, UNTIL THEN SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH!!!!!!!!!!. EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!.

YOU ASSHOLE, NOT EVEN THE BALLS TO LEAVE YOUR NAME. WRITE SOMETHING AND WE WILL JUDGE YOU, UNTIL THEN SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH!!!!!!!!!!. EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!.

i read your bio you say you keep making the same mistake over and over i guess it's true you wrote two stories and didn't finish either one

Nuff said

the oldfart had a brain fart and never finished either of his so called stories. both stories would have been better off unposted instead of being posted unfinished total waste of time and the sites space.

Now that is the kind of war I could stand loosing, but my hell I am 62......

Even though the actual sexual parts pretty much did not exist, it was rather heartfelt and more realistic than most of the stories like this i have found.

Wish it was longer though, wanted to see what happened next (and kind of didn't want them sleeping together that night)

crappy place to end the story you should have written atleast one more page to tell what happens next. do the parents find out? does she get pregnant? do they fuck again? what happens when she goes to college? do they go to college together? a lot of plot holes and a bit rushed could have been SO MUCH BETTER IF IT HAD BEEN FINISHED PROPERLY.

The story was really great, but I feel starved for sex at the end, heh.

THERE WERE SO MANY PUNCTUATION ERRORS IT WAS BOTH A NIGHTMARE TO READ OR LISTEN TO IN A TEXT READER. AUTHOR NEEDS TO TAKE A COLLEGE LEVEL LITERATURE AND ENGLISH CLASS!

To stupid cock fucks like RanDog025, stop reading porn stories just to bitch about punctuation you freaking douche!

Great story. I couldn't care less about any punctation errors. On the other hand, I do dislike reading disparaging comments, especially when they are in all caps.