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"I am a gentleman, aren't I?" he asked somewhat facetiously, knowing exactly how ungentlemanly his actions had just been. But she knew what he meant and her face cleared, growing excited, now.
She nodded enthusiastically and spread her legs. It took his breath away for a moment, the way she opened for him. No other woman had responded with as much spirit as well as submission, and his cock twitched.
"Hand or tongue?" he asked, wanting to hear her say it.
She turned her head, bashful, whispering, "Tongue."
"And where do you want it?" he breathed, nuzzling her neck as his hand roamed her side, up and down her waist with lazy abandon.
"You know where," she whispered back, ears flaming with heat.
"Say it," he ordered.
When she hesitated he repeated himself, his voice growing stern and his hand stopping its travels. "Say it."
"I want your tongue on me... down there." She pointed towards her exposed pussy with a shaking hand.
Eric felt arousal rush through him and he eagerly moved down her body, burying his face in her warmth and her wetness. It didn't take long for her legs to spasm and shake, her breathing growing irregular and hitching frequently as his tongue did wonderful things to her, sending her higher and higher with each swipe. She felt her orgasm approaching, and raised her head to look down at him. The sight of his head there, moving across her as his barely perceptible moans vibrated into her core, sent Arya spiraling into the darkness, shattering as light broke it apart and sent her spinning into oblivion.
They lay together afterwards, still panting and lightly groping each other as their hearts slowed and their eyes grew heavy. Arya snuggled into him, loving the way his arms felt around her.
"Eric?" she asked quietly.
He was suddenly nervous, wondering what she would say, what she would do.
"Yes?"
"I thought you wanted to be inside of me? Did you change your mind?"
It was the last thing he would have expected and he laughed again, startled by her openness and genuine curiosity. "No, honey bee." His look grew lecherous as he met her gaze. "I will take all of you, that desire has not lessened an ounce." He grinned, then, a bit embarrassed but knowing she wasn't experienced enough to judge him for his early ejaculation. "You seem to have dragged the come from me before I could do so tonight, though."
She blushed prettily and he kissed her.
"So... what now?" she asked hesitantly.
He paused once more, his heart racing as he realized that she would want to know what he wanted, what his intentions were. They were both calmer now, able to think logically, and he knew that she would expect him to marry her if he followed through with his desire to take her virginity. He had spoken in the heat of the moment and was instantly regretting it.
He sighed, running a hand through his hair and pulling back slightly. Her face fell as she felt him distance himself. The disappointment in her face pierced him and he sighed again in frustration.
"I don't know," he answered honestly. "I like you and that was... I can't even tell you how great that was. But to think about the future, about us-"
Arya held up a hand, looking almost aghast as she clarified, "No, I- I meant like should I go back to my room or sleep here! I wasn't asking about... that."
Eric flushed, then drew her to him again sheepishly as he tucked her head under his chin. "You will sleep here," he decided.
Arya nodded, and she did.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoWow! I just ran across this story from chapter 11 that was just added and decided to go back and start from the beginning - so glad I did! I also hadn't realized this story was started years ago until I read the previous comment - am so thrilled you came back to it!
Anonymousover 2 years ago@gaelen - ran across this story today and have been binge reading it - just noticed the dates on your Submissions page since you last posted and consider myself fortunate that I only ran across this story today so don't have to wait...MANY THANKS for coming back to us and not abandoning the story!!! You are a gifted writer and I very much look forward to reading more of your work
gaelen33almost 3 years agoAuthorI appreciate your comments and I'll make those changes. There are edited versions of chapters 1-5 in my pending queue right now that will hopefully be done in a few days. They're definitely more well-written after about 7 years of honing my skills haha but I'm sure moving forward there will still be some grammatical errors and such. Once inspired I tend to crank these out quickly, and with no editor there are definitely things that fall through the cracks. But I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I really appreciate your feedback and support :)
<3 Gaelen
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThe story so far is wonderful, the characters are really quite vivid and believable. You’ve captured the mixture of Arya’s naivety and curiosity really well. Her unfortunate encounters with crass men were well written. They were unpleasant to read but not too detailed. In doing so you’ve captured one of the driving forces that is a turn on for subs, that feeling of helplessness. The state of mind that’s easily reproduced in a healthy D/s relationship. I love the budding romance between the two main characters, they aren’t fooling anyone else except themselves about it being just friends.
Minor grammar problems….
Aside from the problems you’ve already noticed one thing I noticed was the misuse of *gentile* (non Jewish), based on the context I presume you intended it to say *genteel*(refined). There was something else but I don’t recall exactly where (prev. chapter I think) in a conversation involving Claire. The sentence didn’t make sense.
Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)
