All Comments on 'A Late Affair Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good story

i like it. well told. keep going

DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

He needs to fill her pussy with his seed. Sc he would look nice showing off her baby bump

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good one page story. Looking forward to reading the rest of the adventure.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Assuming there is more intended to your story, I could not offer more than two stars. This was just too short even if you were meaning to give this as a "teaser." Nothing in it suggests to the reader that it might be offering something worth looking forward to the story. Sorry, but I feel you need a different hobby.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 3 years ago

It was going good - then just.

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Retired, still sporting an active imagination and desire. The good thing about being older is that ALL ladies look good, from barely legal to gracefully mature. Some of us still have a lot to offer, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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