All Comments on 'A Late Summer Beach Weekend'

Well done. That was beautifully well-written and realistic without any loss of eroticism. A rare achievement.

Surprising at almost every turn. Tease - simmer - tease - simmer.

Well written and very hot!

I would give good money to become almost any character in this story except Nick.

Well Done!

Definitely need to close the story with what happened to Jane and Mandy, Jane and Brett, Brett and Mandy. Too many questions linger and need answers!

Thanks for a solid 5!

but not romance. Erotic Coupling.

I see there are A lot of teeney wankers out there pmsl

Jane the super slut was angry because Nick kicked her ass to the curb BEFORE she could do it to him, that was her full intention, use him till she was tired of him then dump him,, her words not mine, she was just pissed because he found someone better before she got the chance

Next ole super slut Jane decides she is going to fuck her best friends boyfriend whether friend likes it or not

Gave it an ace which was 10 times more than it deserved

Not really my kind of story. But, to each his own.

Amazing slow-burn build up to an astonishing climax! Insanely hot, and all the moreso for the anticipation. The description of how the narrator’s feelings of lust keep going back and forth between Brett and Mandy in the climactic threesome, each giving her a different sensation, craving one after the other - and Brett making Mandy cum right after the narrator did, “the way only a man can” - so, so hot. I had to take this in across several sittings because it was too much for just one, if you know what I mean... more like this please!

He was Brandy's and I's age?

Give me a break.

He was my age, so he was Brandy's and MY age.

Wow!! HOT! Hot! Hot!

Too bad we haven't had more from this author. Story could easily support a sequel.

Mfj