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All Comments on 'A Lesbian Present'

by James in London

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
???

I read the first few pharagraphs and couldn't tell what character was talking when. Learn to write.

PunjiPunjiover 19 years ago
Slightly confusing start but great ending

While previous comment was a bit harsh, the beginning was a bit confusing. However, I'm glad I kept going. Story picks up speed rapidly and leads to a very nice and very hot story.

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