by creamking7
I really liked your story but I wish there was more of a build up to the actual sex. She could have teased him more and he could have sneaked a few more peeks of her body.
Still all in all a very good first effort. Let's see more.
This is nice HOT & JUICY sex! Many a horny teen has had this same dream. But it's hard to believe that ANY 18-year-old could be so totally ignorant. Of course, it's sweet Aunt Di Di's horndog needs that carry the battle and drain the boy's balls. Note: Don't miss the two GREAT SEX scenes in the movie, The Notebook.
REALLY HARD TO BELIEVE IN A WAY MAYBE DRAW IT OUT LONGER NEXT TIME THE IDEA IS THERE NEEDS MORE BELIEVE IN IT
I really liked the thoughts of the author, and appreciate the time the author took to write the story. It reads as if it is a real life experence and writen from memory. Thanks for sharing the good sex.....Rich