All Comments on 'A Life Changing Ring Ch. 03'

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dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 5 years ago
Not Bad

That was a good short story .

C_frommnC_frommnover 5 years ago
Well

Considering he was going to learn about the Ring. He missed a Golden opportunity.

He should have gotten into Sisters head and read her thoughts and Desires for later use. Chapters could be Longer.

gpetagpetaover 4 years ago
promising

hope it will go on with hot incest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hot sex, but....

Stars taken away for being SO cliche´ with the over-sized breasts.

Also, a seven inch penis is an inch OVER the American average, and more than that over the world average. So not only a bigger dick than reality, but obnoxiously downplayed.

Then...allusions to gay-male sex.

Are you trying to lose every reader you managed to keep past the first two chapters?

Hope this picks up.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Nicely written! It got me hard. Looking forward to reading more.

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