All Comments on 'A Life Owed'

My 2 cents

A good short story. I liked the characters and the interaction between them. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

This was really sweet and romantic, despite the somewhat coercive nature of their relationship at the outset (or maybe because of it lol). I don't normally even enjoy M/F but I still liked this. Great job, and it's great to see another story from you!

Heartfelt and sexy the perfect combination for a great story, five stars.

It felt rushed.

Another great one!

Glad to see you are back and writing! I can only hope you can continue with 'All Mom's Love'. Remember there's always the aunt's house, doesn't have to be at Will's place (and having to deal with his dad)...

I Loved It! Well done. The collar thing disturbed me, but the story line was great. No Need for more chapters.. Good editing too. Keep writing.

XYZ

[23.04.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!