All Comments on 'A Life Unknown Pt. 01'

Beautifully written, I am VERY anxious to read more of Victoria's adventures! Well done.

Bravo, well done! One of the best stories I have read in a long time. Looking forward to future updates!

Fascinating story, looking forward to the next one. Thank you for sharing.

Great story!

5

Looking forward to Part 2

nice story but would that really be all in a note left to a lawyer to be read like a will at the time of death? It is more like some journal or the draft for a novel she wants published after her death.

Enjoying the series - 5*

I’m enjoying this story very much. I often like good historical fiction, and this one appears to be well-researched, with vivid settings, described well. Your characters are interesting and well-developed also. I think the device of a letter to a lawyer is dubious and unnecessary. I do wish your editing was more careful, but it’s certainly not difficult to read.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Thank you everyone for your comments. To those of you querying why Victoria wrote a letter to her lawyer she has reasons which, while not vital to the flow of the story, will become clear.

A well-written story with a superior plot. The characters were well-developed and seemed as real as possible. The historical background was appreciated. The sex scenes were realistic and enjoyable.

Enthralling and left me hungry for the next installment which I'll read tonight.

5 Stars, all in spidery handwriting!