by TheDok
This story continues to be both absorbing. Can't wait for the next instalment.
Great storyline and very smartly crafted. But why in the romance section instead of erotic coupling?
Very well written, but the last couple chapters have clearly morphed from the "romance" genre into the LW genre. Similarly, the character you created has revealed herself (and by her own words) of being incapable of truly loving anyone else but herself. Maybe that moves the remaining of the series to erotic couplings? Definitely doesn't belong here... 5*