by bhart1
Thank You, Chik and Papa will always have a place in my heart. Their love and deep kindness touch me profoundly. Something about this story is so powerfully human, a love that eludes so many.
Courage and compassion swirled with passion and trust. Sadly, life claims some of us too soon, but it is the quality of our relationships and love, not mere time that defines us. It does' t get any better than this!
As i started reading this story i felt the difference it had ...
It really made tears rool down my eyes..
I cant explain how truely adored each and every moment as i moved forward..!
Absolutely a winning piece of art..!
I m just utterly .....consumed withbthe intensity of love u showed.!!
Thanks really .!!
Shiv
I echo what others have said. You have a beautiful love story, but it is tinged with sadness. But the love is so deeply-seated and fulfilled, that you know Chik and Papa had a wonderful life, albeit short. Loved Papa's hairy body. Please write another story!
I'm astounded this is your first story. Perhaps it is just your first posted here. Such great characters and a heart touching story. Please, please, please write more.
If this was your first story than bravo. This was sad of course but well done. Would you consider a second part where he meets someone to share his twilight years with? A story like this serves as a reminder of the importance of being grateful for each day given, the people in our our lives and to pay attn to our health. Great read even if it was a bit more depressing than i usually like.
Damnit!!! I damn near cried!!! So hauntingly beautiful!!5 stars!! I look forward to more of your submissions!!!
You know when you find the one you are met to be with, when you least expect it. I met mine in a night club. And he is my steadying rock to my raging waters. I'm sixty in a few months and he's only a few years older than me. What I'm saying is, enjoy the memorise and stop beating yourself up. If you are still thinking of him then he's not gone.
Yes, but sometimes life doles them out. I'm glad you found the story rewarding. Thanks for reading and commenting.
I ❤️ 💗 this story a lot. I think is so far your best story. I just read it for the 3rd time, now that I saw you posting a new story. I had to read it again. It makes me cry 😢.
I've read this story and 're read it. I noticed this time it was more then sex, as some one who was lucky to be diagnosed with cancer just in time, long story. It rears its ugly head her slyly and it's not always testicular cancer neither. But the pair of you had a good and long life together, cherise the time you had with him. Much joy.
To Anonymous (who posted 3/2/22): Thank you for the supportive comment and I'm glad you enjoyed this story.