All Comments on 'A Lifetime & Beyond'

Normally I'm one to prefer the longer, drawn out stories that focus not only on the exual encounter, but also on the seduction. This story surprised me however in its ability to draw me in without drawing out the story. Not to mention the avoidance of using the typical words for describing the male and female body parts.

Well done. Keep up the excellent work.

Beautifully written! Excellent use of words!

Thanks for the visions!

Same start as 'Unadulterated, Forbidden Love' - but the story is better.

Lukas

I like your stories, but all of your incest stories start out the exact same way, words and all. If the stories connect, then they connect, but you do not need the same beginning for each story.

Very hot!

Excellent writing, beautiful scene

So torrid, so hot...more they are made for each other. You make it happen...and make it happen for me too...

I thoroughly enjoy good sibling incest tales and this was one of the better ones that I have found on this site. Thanks for sharing it.

It wasn't until the seventh paragraph, that I realized that these twins were boy girl. Great story but since fraternal twins can be boy boy, only not as often!

A shame that Literotica rules prevent us from learning how the twins love developed from their earlier ages, as it obviously did.

Really nice story, good loving sex. Enjoyed. I wished for a sister, my younger years, so we could share this type of love.

Good story, am checking other submissions............

From an oldie with a young mind and fantastic fantasies.

This story was so very well written that I felt that I was there with them. Whoa!!!! to have a love like that even with a brother is something every girl would love to have. Bravo for such a great story!!!!

good story

Breathtaking. You achieved so much in this short story. This one is among the best. True lovemaking and connection described. I enjoyed it.

The title says it all!! Will continue to peruse your library hoping to find more like this!