All Comments on 'A Literary Mistake Ch. 03'

A very good loving tale, well spun. Try to write more often, you are an asset to this community.

Congratulations. You've written a romantic story that tugs the heartstrings and is at the same time erotic. It wasn't sex, it was making love although you have to use sexual terms because there is no other way to describe the act itself, you made the words sound loving.