All Comments on 'A Little Bit of Force'

Full of Shit

She should have taken his balls between her back teeth and crunched them.

Semen is the fluid that comes out. Sperm is short for spermatozoa; it's only one of the parts of semen. Look it up here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Semen

Also, I didn't feel your story went anywhere. Why should I care about this guy? Why did the girl sound so artificial? Perhaps they could have been a married couple play acting? The dialog was artificial sounding in a way that I imagine might be said during play acting.

Maybe you could follow it up in such a way as to explain why the girl didn't just run out of there screaming?

Well, whether it is sperm or semen the story made me cum really hard.

thanks for some needed release,

syn