All Comments on 'A Long Hard Ride with Granddaughter'

I really enjoyed the voyeuristic aspects of your story, it's clear you're a talented writer. I would have preferred the narrator to have been less ineffectual but I know some people like that. 5* nonetheless.

Please never write again!! Your stories are so similar to your fellow British writers. Your "Revenge" is so weak that you make Neville Chamberlain look like Ghengis Kahn in his dealings with Hitler. For Gods' sake grow a pair! Your attempts at writing revenge are so feeble they wouldn't even top an April Fools joke from a 5 year old. You make the Gentle part of your name be pronounced as cowardly chicken.