All Comments on 'A Long Hot Summer Ch. 02'

This brother and sister are sexy, hot, and dripping wet. Well written, keep it up and continue the story.

Well written story and very hot! I just hope it doesn't take another 6 months for your next chapter!

This story is excellent. Please continue the story much sooner than later.

This Brother/Sister tale is one of the best I have read in this genre. Please tell us more about these two. You have a great talent, thanks for sharing it.

more please tell us what happens the rest of the summer ad when the parents come home do they go to college together please tell us

I've been reading stories on this site for a long time and this one is quickly becoming my favorite. The only critique I have are the few typos. Other than that it's fantastic. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

I thoroughly enjoyed this one! I'd like to see you continue it. Thanks for another good story.

I never coment on stories but I had to this time.Loved this

tale and hope you add another chapter or six.

That was the best erotic story i have ever read. Where do you get such imagination? Whats you motivation? It was amazing. Can't wait for part three.

I thought you did a fine job with this story you left yourself plenty of wiggle room.You are set for plenty of more chapters witch I would like to read.Looks like he was okay with the sub role maybe you will see where that goes.many possibilities maybe mom finds out and is okay with it or even drawn into it.