All Comments on 'A Long Time Coming'

by Cromagnonman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent story, thank you for writing it.

wapentakewapentakealmost 3 years ago

It's good to see a politician getting their comeuppance. A good, entertaining story.

A_BierceA_Biercealmost 3 years ago

Capital, just capital!

Not only did you let the good guys win and live happily ever after, the bad guy lost and didn't.

EgregiousEgregiousalmost 3 years ago

Brilliant story with a moral. Have been to Coffin Bay, a distant relative of mine used to own the butcher shop.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Very Nice

A decent story, well-told.

It also featured a very different 'revenge'

Thank You

HP

teedeedubteedeedubalmost 3 years ago

Nice, as usual. Good to know that elected officials in Australia are every bit as incompetent and corrupt as those in the USA. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Behold the power of the unelected, unaccountable bureaucrats, aka the deep state.. The true power in government. Working toward their own goals when they can, and ducking their heads and biding their time when they can't. Thus Kenneth the lesson.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Justice done. Like the story a lot. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A rugged read, but so well done that it can only be a 5.

stewartbstewartbabout 2 months ago

This was a hard read to get into the gist of the real story. Once you knew from where it came and where it was going it became an enjoyable read. Thanks.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...