All Comments on 'A Long Time from Home Ch. 23'

Due to vacation, followed by the flu, the next instalment will be a little late :(

Great story keep up the great work! Can’t wait for more

This chapter has a *ton* of errors in it. I know you don't have an editor, but surely a self-editing pass would have caught a lot...

Should have thought of this earlier . Tuck - not tug . Augment - not argument .Thrash - not trash. Really tied up in your story ! Thanx .