All Comments on 'A Long Time from Home Pt. 02 Ch. 00 - Prologue'

I was wondering whether this story would continue... I'm glad to see it back. I do love the callback and reference to the Sea Peoples and the Bronze Age collapse. It may have been a dark age, but it was a fascinating one all the same.

Now, if you could only translate Linear A for us...

Oh, the story will continue all right. My biggest challenge is that I don’t write in chronological order and for some odd reason, the first chapters four or five chapters of ALTFH II suffers from serious neglect and needs a lot of writing, while a lot of the other chapters are done.

Anyway, as with so many other things, I did look into the various undeciphered writing systems when I was researching for the Baylon writing system and I have to say that I’m glad that Linear A, Cretan Hieroglyphic and Harappan script were no longer used when Ivan was alive, since he would have known then. That leaves Tartessian (Southern Spain) as the only ‘problem’, but one I can avoid.

As always, thank you for reading and commenting :)

Can’t wait … 😀

What a wonderful surprise this morning when I discovered a continuation of the story I thought had finished. I'm so happy you've decided to let Ivan continue his story. It's a fascinating one.

Very glad to see a continuation of this story

Glad you are back

Yes!!! I’ve been looking forward to this. The first part is by far one of my favorite stories!

I've really enjoyed the idea you've created to explain the demise of Atlantis. You have obviously taken a lot of time to engage older Latin, and put together a working scenario that has been very consistent with the story line. Yeah I know, literotica, you've got to have sex scenes, especially when Ivah receives vis energy from screwing, sharing pleasure. Though, it almost takes away the rhythm of the story when, "Uh oh, gotta stop and fuck." But that's just me. Otherwise, super story. Look forward to part II.