All Comments on 'A Long Time from Home Pt. 02 Ch. 03'

I don't know what went wrong with the title of this chapter (It should have been A LONG TIME FROM HOME PT. 02 CH. 03), but I'll try to have it fixed as soon as possible :(

Superb story and still very engrossed, you have a superb imagination!

lol the title was a dozy however the story knocked it out of the park, well done !!!

It's refreshing

Great story, keep going and keep up the story pace too!

Welcome back.

Another great chapter to start the new year. Quick question. Is he going to see kids again or he will be busy?

That will depend on which kids you're referring to. If you're talking about Zena and Cyra, the answer is yes :)

I really do like this story. It is going in a great direction and developing more character with each chapter.

Thanks for sharing your creative efforts with all of us.

Another great chapter. Thank you! I hope he still visits the twins for Christmas, as he promised.

I think an update on the status of the Interpol agents would be in line with a future meeting with Ivan.

So enjoy your writing, always a treat when you post another chapter. Thanks for sharing your talents and efforts.

The title of this chapter needs to be fixed as you have two chapter twos in a row.

I’m glad you moved this story to sci-fi as I finally noticed it because I check that every day. I’ve read the whole thread my this week and have loved it. The amount of research you must have to do is ridiculous.

I don’t think you need an editor as the story seems very well laid out. You do need someone to help proof read your spelling and grammar and I offer to help you with that.

Yes, I do spend a lot of time on research, which unfortunately slows down the writing. If you really want to proof read, sent me a PM and we can talk about it :)