All Comments on 'A Long Wait'

I really loved this piece.

What I liked was the fact that you built the suspense up, you made me, as the reader, want them both to encounter at least one night of hot, steamy sex! You built up the characters really well, and I began to empathize with Pete.

As for the actual erotica content, well, my wetness speaks for itself really. I loved the descriptions you created, you sculpted the characters bodies and feelings really well, and what I wouldn't give to have a couple of hours with Pete.

Post some more up soon! I'll be hanging in there till' you do ;)