All Comments on 'A Long Walk Home Ch. 10'

I'm back for the 10th time or more rereading just the last couple chapters and this 1. JazCullen, you write Amazingly deep stuff, and I just want More!

Mistakes were made. I read this while being high and listening to Ride It by Regard and enjoyed imagining them cuddled against each other. Well done. Loved every second of it.

Maybe my 6th read? This series Rocks! Wish you will contribute more

You get very in depth with your characters. 9 & 10 my favorites. Hope new job working out as a Selfish Me wants you writing and posting again

They could essentially just be their own story and still be a kick ass short story!

bravo!

Dont know how you do it...it's simply fabulous....thank you...nhu

!!!!!

:) Your work is remarkable ... it brings me to tears more than i would like and yet i'm one of the ones up all night just to keep reading ... Love This Story Line .. def. hooked !!

Twice now you have managed to brig tears into my eyes. How do you make such beautiful art in words? You have a gift.

I knew when they met that they were destined to be mated

I cried for ten minuets straight after I read this.

I'm so happy they are letting their pain go and finding each other. Love you writing! Next chapter ........ ;)

That dark cold lonely place... I have been reading people's comments on how they dislike Freya.

She will find happiness, and like me, the darkness will be lit up with pure love.

Yipeee...I still cant believe how great this story is btw none of the other follow ups from FTI to TC is a let down....EXTRAORDINARY!!!!!!!

xoxo

Aria

wow!!!!! Silky Silky Now!!!! I am so loving this story.

Is Absouloutly . . .... . . , , . . . Speechless! Thanks go s on indefinately∞ Feel like singing Lahhhhhh

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That was awesome...

I ALMOST cried.. not quite because there were others in the room with me and it wouldve been weird if they saw me crying out of nowhere. But great job! So sad to almost come to an end in a couple more chapters... Please make more!

Really cried when I read this...and I don't do that. Keep writing. Please.

i know i'm a little behind on everyone else's comments but i've only just found this series....and i figured that Freya was Dayton's new mate but the first thought i had when it was confirmed was 'How will she have kids?'...oh well...will just have to keep reading to find out!

I've been reading through your stories chronologically, and even though at times it felt predictable and repetitive, I was still always intrigued enough to want to go forward through your world. I have grown to care for many of your characters and it occurs every now and then that I smile to myself at a moment throughout the day remembering a scene or a line. Your writing has become stronger, so has your storytelling. (Though admittedly I did roll my eyes when Rayne became pack, and the new couples' pairing up come as no surprise...) I really hope to keep up with you in the future. All the best :)

Wow... I didn't expect him to finally break down his barriers and go for Freya... Had hoped but never actually thought he would.... Brilliant writing... am lloking forward to finishing the chapters?

That is all I am going to say

Good reading

I read the whole story within a few hours. Wow. Wowwowwow. Please hurry and keep posting more! I need more! haha. It's great. :) I wish I was as good with words and plot. Gah! You're doing great and you're so talented!

First of all, I just wanted to say how much I enjoy all of your stories! I have read and reread all of them! I love this story the most so far (you have progressively become better and better) but I really hope something about Emily and Stephen is in it because it seems like something is happening there, but i'm not sure if you're including them in this story or not. I definitely hope they do have a story because I think they would make an interesting and sweet couple! One day I hope I can buy your books/stories (I definitely wouldn't mind, they would be the money!)

I Love it . It is Perfect ! I cant wait for more !

i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thats all i can say right now

more more more!!!

This is one of the best stories i have read keep it up

You just get better and better each time you write ,to think i was laughing and crying at the same time,was impossible, thank you for writing such beautiful and creative story's .

ps ..... you made my day

Ohh wow that bit was soo good can't wait for the next ,i'm litteraly on pins and needles here, boy this is one fantastic story

As always the quality and depth of feeling you achieve in your writing as well as the personalities of your characters amaze me, this chapter was truly stunning. The emergence of Freya and Dayton's relationship is beautiful to witness, and though I love all your work I think this is definitely the best so far!

Keep up to good work.

X

Would have had to stab myself in the neck if i found out too late.This is actually funny cos i was just lamenting about the absence of anything readable when I saw this.

I must confess I have a big problem with your stories......which is the fact that they are sooooooooooooooo good that I usually read them in 10 minutes or less.The only solution to this is to post 3x every week heheheh!

just like Nors i was crying and laughing at the same time!!! lovely, lovely chapter. :)

more please... Jaz, i have to make my comments short. i lost words to thank and describe your work. simply marvelous!!

You are undoubtedly one of my favourite author's of all time!!

I usually don't shed tears of joy and sadness when I read stories.

But damn....your writing skills have sent me on a emotional rollercoaster thus far.

I'm a 23 year old female and I can honestly say that I have learned so much from this story.

It is so realistic and heart warming.

Not only is this entertaining but I'm learning a lot from each chapter on how to better myself and get the most out of life.

Can't wait for your future installments.

~Love & happiness

Just another wonderful chapter to your already awsome storyline. Many thanks on the earlier than norm post. Very nice suprise. As always, please keep doing what you do. THANK YOU!! U ROCK!!

are the emotions written that I almost believe you have experienced them yourself, although you don't seem the cold blooded/needing to be loved Vamp that Freya is. Jaz, some how you have the ability to write some of the most in-depth emotional scenes I read in a long time. It feels strange to me to have feelings for characters that don't exist (or do they). As always I look forward to your next chapter.

COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate waiting!!!!! Love it by the way hehehe =^_^= PK

Finally you got to the part of them realizing they are mates. Excellent story so far. Now all you need is Annie to come back into the picture.

Dear God Jazz hurry! yummylicious!

SORRY BUT LITERALLY THERE ARE NO WORDS TO EXPRESS THE WAY I FEEL WHEN I READ YOUR STORIES, SO I HAD TO COME UP WITH SOME OF MY OWN LOL, HONESTLY I DIDNT THINK YOU COULD GET THE STORY ANY BETTER THAN IT ALREADY WAS BUT GIRL YOU ARE AWSOME!!!

now we are back on track. thanks for the story so far. can you make your chapters longer?

YES!!!! THANK YOU!

I think I enjoy your work so much because it is so nicely comforting. While we all pretty much know that there will be a happy ending the path you take to get there is always a unique journey.

Well Done!

Just what we needed too very emotional suppressed individuals to fall for each they both can understand the pain the other has gone through. the one time manipulation is a good thing to do. They are forcing each other to see that they are survivors not victims.

Neither character is some one you would fall in love with right off but they have so many layers. You know how to write a three dimensional character and make us fall in love with them

I love it!

Finally they know they are each others love and now they just need to tell the other. Great story.

This is as great as the others. Another fine chapter of a great story. I had thought that things might be progressing fast at the end but I realized that they both knew they loved the other but did not know the feeling was shared and neither was going to tell the other yet. It was again a enjoyable read. I thank you and your editor for the experience and humbly wait the next chapter.

This sweat dripping off of me isn't from this chapter...uh it's just really hot in my house :P Seriously, such passion...wow. What else can I say? Now to go find my towel...to dry the sweat of course

FINALLY! I was waiting for the breakthrough!

MEJ, you continue to outdo yourself.

Now let's get on with the luvin. I'm thinking these two may turn out to be my second favorite duo--Loretta and Andrei are still my boos.

Great chapter. Please write more soon.

So the path is set for these two more or less, awesome! I can't wait to see their romantic interludes; long walks on the beach, gentle odes to the moon, sweet stolen kisses, the odd tender stab in the throat with a sharp knife, you know, romantic stuff!

But I miss the kitty!! Where'd that pussy go??? LOL

Thanks for the extra chapter Jaz, as always, looking forward to the next one!

excellent! can't wait for more!

I am soooo loving this chapter!!!! Are you kidding me!!! Freya is going to blow a gasket when she finds out their mates!!! Strange'!!! Kudos!!! Snaps!!!!! Alright you've got my juices flowing!!! Now next chapter!!!! Hurry!!! Your HHIC

Thank you! Jaz my girl this chapter was realy deep.

You finally allowed Dayton to achieve peace with the letting go of the pain from the loss of his beloved Faith; which in turn allowed for his wolf to help him open his eyes and see that he was gifted with another opportunity to experience a love for the ages. I cry/cried when you write of the pain that Freya has had to endure (chapter 09 & 10) and held inside for the better part of two-thousand years with those around her none the wiser.

In the real world there are hundreds/thousands/millions of people who walk around with that "grin and bear-it" look to fool the masses; however, if you only scratch litely on their facade you will find that they are hurting deeply be it from spousal abuse, child abuse, rape, depression, etc. For me it was depression after the death of my brother at his own hand thirteen years ago. No one saw it coming because he always wore the silliest/goofiest grin; however, luckily he left me with his three sons to spoil rotten along with my twin boys. Hell know I am crying......

Let me move on......On another note, I for one always feel special when you email me back as an acknowledgment of my comments; however, rest assured that when you can't I still feel good because you always make me feel appreciated simply for being one of your readers/fans.

As I have always said, continue doing what you do soooooo damn good and I will be eagerly waiting for the finished product. Much love.....

Your #1 fan......Rudegal74

I saw this pairing coming from the first and still . . . wow.

so happy for this little extra chapter, excellent

loved it Iam so happy that he has realized she is his mate Icant wait till the next one

Love Dayton and Freya, they're going to be good together. Now that we've been spoiled with two chapters a week, I'm going be expecting another one SOON!

You are one of the most amazingly talented writers I have had the privilege to read their outstanding stories.....I really hope that you will publish this story of vampires and werewolves. It is a very unique storyline that deserves to be read by the world. Please keep the chapters coming, as I'm happy to see Dayton and Freya getting together!! I, also, can't wait for Rayne and Gard's story, too!!!! Thank you!!

Jaz, I will be brief. This chapter was a welcome sight after this weekends trip. Finally! You finally tamed the wild woman unbreaking them both. What more can I say. The master has outdone herself yet again.

On a side note... So when you feel guilty, you give us more stories? Humm......

Thank you Jaz! I need something good tonight and your chapter was just that. Brilliant as ever and I love how both Freya and Dalton have accepted their love but can't immagine that the other one could accept it. Simply brilliant! And next chapter more of Reyne and Gard please, because I want to see them moving on too.

By the way, i am only anon because I am not at home normally I am Bluna.

you're working on the next chapter or it's already been submitted, right?

I love it. Cannot wait to fine out what else happens. This story is awesome.

Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow!! I knew it. I knew it!! This chapter was great. I'm so happy he was able to take the time to see that she is his mate! And the scene after he realized he needed to let Faith go... Out standing!I loved it!

Honestly, this is a beautiful piece of writing. I am so overwhelmed (and of course eagerly waiting for the next installment).

Freya opened up! and Dayton finally let go of Faith :)

this chapter rocked my socks! you really are an amazing writter, I know I've written it several times but you are just.... well amazing :)

thanks for giving us this extra treat! I was overjoyed when I saw there was a new chapter already!

I want to read more now!! aghhh why must you torment us so with your stories.

OH MY GOSH. THAT WAS SO AMAZING I ALMOST STARTED TO CRY AND I WAS GOING TO BE MAD IF FREYA GOT HER WAY BUT THE WAY SHE PUT IT TO DAYTON. THEN THE WAY HE GAVE IT RIGHT BACK WAS JUST AMAZING. AMAZING IS THE ONLY WORD I CAN COME UP WITH. IT WAS JUST SO AWESOME AND BETTER THAN CHOCOLATE.

This is quite possibly the best chapter you have ever written. Amazing!

~hz

it's lovely... you're a great writter! i love it!!! keep it up! i can't wait for more...

What a surprise for this extra chapter, it well makes up for no replies! This chapter was so beautifully crafted that I was crying from start to finish, both out of sadness and happiness. I'm afraid Brilliant just won't cut it this week so... it was...

Amazing, BRILLIANT, Cool, Dazzling, Extraordinary, Fantastic, Great, Heavenly, Incandescent, Joyous, Killer, Legendary, Magnificent, Nerve-rackingly-awesome (that 1 was hard :D), Outstanding, Phenomenal, Quintessential, Remarkable, Stupendous, Tremendous, Unique, Vivacious, Wonderful, eXcellent (hey it still counts), Yell-worthy, Zappy (yes, that's a real word look it up :D)

Self-proclaimed Groupie Zooey

I pooped.

now I can't wait too see Gard give Rayne what he promise her please don't let me wait too long,i'm on the edge of my seat

Really the best surprise ever!

I don't think I can say much more.....I suspected that she would be his mate and I can just imagine her shock when she realises what's going on not to mention the reaction of the the others. Something to look forward too??? JC...as usual, beautifully written!

So excited to see another chapter and such a wonderful, important, lovely chapter too! Thanks Jaz!

you never fail to amaze me jaz!..great work as always, now i go back to stalking lit for another post from u!!

Your stories have become part of my weekly routine over the past year and I've loved each of them. This story is no exception. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us!

Fantastic work Jaz. As Always. Thank you for giving us this!

I love this story! It is absolutely amazing and I will be checking for more rather obsessively I'm sure!! Amazing!!

you keep us on edge girl!! excellent as always!

Do you hear me Jazcullen! I need more of your amazingness :P Love you! xoxoxoxoxo

A little quick for daytons realization. After 50 years a knife in the throat over eggs....ah well he got where he needed to be very good as always.

this my first time posting a comment ... But I had to... I'm hooked on this story... The anguish of these two is so palpable... So intense... You have a gift !! I cried so much...specially when Freya was talking to Nors. Finally Dayton listens to his wolf. The love that will blossom from such deep pain will be so rewarding for both. I can't wait...! *but alas I must*

Your work gets better with every chapter!!!

Duhuuude!! You can't end this like this! I banged my SHIN against the desk hurrying to check if this chapter got posted, for goodness' sake! It was amazing.. yeah, but I need MORE! OK, OK.. I'm being a little selfish, but can you blame me? Now I gotta wait AAAALL the way till wednesday or even longer! No pressure.. Pressuring you wouldn't help the next chapter be as amazing as it will be.. *sigh* Love ya, Jaz.. And man! I thought she was just gonna disappear, not GET HERSELF KILLED! But yeah, I guess that the dude had to feel like he was gonna lose her too.. I mean that Dayton.. had to.. anyways..

Thank you for the surprise. Mike from Texas

That is all I can say...dumbstruck, awestruck, speechless, in tears...all of the above....

Tereasa (T)

With no others between them or beside them, to help or interferre, they are breaking down barriers within each other - both of them relying on the needs to protect and comfort within them!

I wasn't expecting Freya to call her brother but it was a welcomed turnabout for Freya, and in some way she WAS able to convey to him what she had been contemplating earlier. Totally added to the feel of coming of age and emotional growth wrought in this chapter!

Looking forward to more of this fabulous story!

Jaz,

You write such outstanding stories that I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your feeling better, and that you will be submitting your next chapter very soon Pleeeeeaaaaasseeeee :-) Keep up the great work

sailordblj

Thanks for the sneak peek!!!!!!

Thank you, Jaz. I love this story and always consider it a gift to get to read a new chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Amazing.

PLEASEsend more soon

love this story.

I love this chapter so much! Thanks for making my Sunday!

.. all they said before, and more ;)

I'm not sure I can say much else, less it just becomes totally boring. But of course, I will :)

Totally excited that it's a double treat week - is it sad that we're all squealing with delight and doing *the happy dance*??

I've said previously that I thought Freya was the trigger that was going to send Day hurtling back into life. This chapter just had me at knees, though. Two broken souls in deep agony that are going to save each other - which makes me feel very emotional (yes, tears in eyes etc). I've loved Freya from the start - I always felt she had huge potential - and to see her develop a soft side because of her 'downfall' is amazing. Loving Dayton too for realising what he needs to do.

lol

F

I know nothing is really "resolved" for Freya yet, but it seems a little hasty for her to toss aside her long-cherished dreams of eternal rest in the space of 1.5 pages. I don't mean to criticize this powerful and emotion-filled chapter, but I didn't expect him to break through to her quite so fast. He still has miles to go, of course, and I look forward to seeing him woo her!

Love the story! It's definitely the one story that I most love to see updates to in the "new stories" list! Keep up the good work!

Thank you for sharing this story. Your ability to express the intensity of emotions is shattering. You're the best!

That was so god damned good, there are hardly words to describe it. I absolutely love what you are putting those two through. And I have to admit that they are by now my favorite characters of all of them, as they are not straightforward at all and have a depth that is mostly only hinted at. Keep going!

I can't wait for Day to go back to the pack with Freya on his arm. Both completely different people then when they last saw them. His family is going to cry when they see the new improved Day,a happy Day what a nice change. Rayne of course will give him the I told you so smirk!

I loved every single nano second of this chapter, can't wait until he tells her she is his mate. The actual mating should be extremely HOT. Only one more word to say! MORE!