All Comments on 'A Long Way from Home'

I was skimming after it looked like it was going to be your average swapping story , but then I saw this was different . Nice twist .

Really fun little story ! Thank you for sharing with us.

Yes, a very nice twist was inserted towards the end . But the road there meandered without mercy. CharlieB4 takes chances and rarely repeats his themes. As a fan , I selfishly wish he made one of principal parties a barrister in midst of dicey legal drama . That subplot would have spiced this pro forma ( nipped in bud) swap story. He did such an excellent Law and Order transposed down under with " The Empty Nest " series.

Okay, cute with the twist, but given the ladies' different body types, even doggy style wasn't likely to fool the men. Why not just ask the men if they'd be interested in a swap?

The men were obviously attracted to the other women, and at least in hindsight we can see that they would have been interested!

It was probably the most believable story I've read here in a long time. It was well done, engaging, and had a nice little twist. I enjoyed it. Thanks for posting.

I can't resist this one. I got my degree from the University of Adelaide and went out with a girl from Cummins, not a million miles from Cleve. And I met quite a few Richards. Salt of the earth, backbone of the economy.

A very good story and with a twist...And after 7 really trashy stories this story excel itself even more! Thank you for the reading and for saving the LW's day! 4*

Nice twist at the end. Thanks for writing. But...

if the story is based in the US, Ashley wouldn't have been getting Julie any paracetomol.

I'm not into swinging or swapping stories unless there is drama and destruction involved but this made me laugh!

4* easy!

Four self-aware, intelligent adults making their own decisions without deceiving each other (even when they try). Well-done, mate!

Lots of erotic build-up, only to fall flat at the end. Your style and grammar are admirable. Keep writing, but next time follow-through with the fun.

Why bother?

and they remained faithful. Best ending for ages. A good story where we didn't have a load of sex with people other than those they ar married to.

At last, a proper story with real people, well done

Thanks, I really enjoyed this one. A solid 5 in my book.

I was always taught a good short story should lead the reader in one direction then hit them with a surprise. That's what I tried to do here. I agree that I was perhaps a little heavy handed in the leading but hey, I'm no writer.

I don't think there will be a sequel.

Cheers

Charlie

All that detail over three pages and NOTHING happened! Imagine the look of disappointment on my face! Haha! Good one! Am I redfaced or what? And no sequel? Even better. Don't give the suckers who read your story even a crum! Bitches! 2*

Best story I have read in a long time!! Thanks for sharing.

CharlieB4 great tale. Its unusual to like all the characters in a story but these characters fleshed out and unique were wonderful, the story had just the right mix and the result? Nothing shy of perfect. Reflecting my comments on the story I gave you 5* and I hope that you will be posting a lot more!.

People, if you're reading these comments before you read the story...don't. No wife gets fucked by another man in this silly story. 1*

HA!! Great one Charlie!! i loved all of these characters!! And what a switch!! Thank You for another great story.

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Once Ashley has a oversized tiil for a weekend mixed with pent up lust it could cause problems.

I don't see any point in this non-story. It is well written but there is really nothing in it.

I get tired of twelve inch penises and 36DDDD boobs coupling predictably. I liked the characters and dialogue. I can only see one comment, so I hope this not repetitiou. If you ever edit, americans never call Tylenol paracetamol.

Not a favorite, but the twist at the end was good.

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Was advised to read your LW stories, so started with this one. 5* If they had carried through, it would have been hard to get the genie back in the bottle. Clever ending!

A very erotic and enjoyable tale. The twist ending showed that CharlieB4's creativity.

I, and probably others, would like to see the down under sequel.

Very nice. 5*.

Great writing! Excellent character development and plot working with a great finish!

Great story, it built up to a fabulous ending, well done.

Nice twist. But sad that all four were ready to do an unspoken swap.

Good story, last paragraph tarnished it a some though.