All Comments on 'A Long Weekend with Mom Ch. 02'

Did something happen to part of your story? Part 1 ends with them driving the cabin, Part 2 begins with then waking up in bed together. Where's the missing section that should link these two parts?

I'm not sure what happened, but it appears you posted your original chapter 2 while not having posted the rest of your original chapter 1, just the first broken up part. Please, whatever you do, don't kill yourself or beat yourself up too hard, lol. In the decade I've been reading Literotica, I've never come across an author that was so damn apologetic. Don't worry, it's not the end of the world.

So, part one got chomped into four chunks, and now this proper Chapter 2 has replaced 2, 3, and 4 from the b0rked Chapter 1. You may need to post both parts again with a new name, or see if the Lit staff can fix the broken chapter 1.

Brilliant!

After the previous, fragmented parts, I was starting to despair that the author had ignored my feedback. This chapter has set my fears aside. I have admired this author's writing and disagreed with the decision to break up chapter 1 into four small portions.

This chapter showcases the writer's talent and allowed the story to flow' I am drooling with anticipation of the forthcoming "surprise".

5/5

I really like your story, I would like to read the missing part, I hope you keep this series going it's interesting. Thank You!

I hope that the story can be straightened out and have all of the pages posted in correct order.

Even though chapter two left the reader wondering how they got from the car, to in bed the next morning, the rest of the chapter was very good.

Good luck with the story, and getting the lost pages posed.

Liked the shower scene, there's never enough written about the bonding than can take place in the shower ,and I applaud those who think enough to write it. Thank you.

this time its going good. love between mom son are so exciting specially the shower scene but missing something is you should describe about mothers naked body more. you should describe about moms bare buttock and some anal work like licking moms anus or fingering. a mothers body is too attracted to every horny teenage boy because mom is the nearest women to him. hope next time you should give some anal work and pervertness between two.

A good read the second time around.

Thanks

However, in the first part you refer to "Holly" without identifying her until much later in the chapter. That is disrespectful to your readers. And what the fuck is "b/c"? You don't have room to spell it out? That is really juvenile. Real writers don't do shit like that.

Had to move back home after burning my hands in a job accident.....after a few days of awkwardness Mom and I had a chat to ease the problem. Your shower scene reminded me of how mom and progressed after masturbating me for a few days. I will never forget the beauty of little droplets of my cum on her blond pussy hair. Moms and sons can really help each other out.

There will always be people who had (or have) mother-son fantasies & who will enjoy them. I am in that number...

I love reading incest &taboo and your realy good at it so plz more yours leannxxxx

Why are his mothers' tits 36As all of a sudden, when she had 36Ds in the very begining of the story?

I've never had the desire to cum on a woman's face! I can think of better places for that, and besides, I see doing that as an age-old act of degrading the woman.

It was great until he started freaking out. I mean, how many times have kids done things that they though their moms were going to be mad about and when they weren't they kept admitting their guilt?... Especially when they're moms are trying to do more...

Anyway, I gave you a good vote but, I'm done with this story.

This is one of the most tender , sensual, passionate incestuous mother/son love stories I have read. There is no self-doubt, self-recrimination, guilt, self-loathing, nor shame. There is simply honest, open love between two consenting adults. Although fiction, in real life, could any two people ask for more?