by tracker99504
It is a very good erotic story by an excellent writer.
keep writting . We enjoy your stories
And poorly-written smut, at that. When are some of you idiots going to learn the difference between "erotic" and
"pornography?" And for God's sake, quit with the ellipses ( ... )! They detract from the read. This one gets a ZERO!
I thought your story was great, I wouldn't waste the time commenting on it otherwise. I love the genre of incest, and the way the som & mom hook up is unusual enough to have caught my eye. If a sequel was on the cards, the mom should properly seduce her son, (lingerie, surprise etc.), and then progress to bringing along one of her mature friends.
Well done, looking forward to the next installment....
The sex scene is tepid at best, the poor grammer really takes away from the feeling. Everything is too quick, way too rushed. I gave you a 2.
loved it, great passion, not too fast, screw grammar this is porn not english class, loved the ending, made me laugh
Mate: Don't pay too much attention to the naysayers. There are the English majors who'll rip you a new one. They are the moralists who will try to do likewise. Ignore them. They don't have the guts to sign in and are always anonymous. Keep up the good work. Now, How about part 2.
Such joy for us ........
Well whatever it is that we are.
This was a juicy little snack. Yes, it's porn. But then, it is good porn. Sometimes, a person likes a meal, but a snack is often better. Keep with the writing. Also, nice that you took care of the dog. After all, he DID start it for your main character.
Thank you for writing. I did not read the father/daughter story, sometimes I read a short one but it is not my favorite incest. Mother/son followed by brother/sister then lesbian. I do like when mom and daughter get it on after either of the first scenes.
tracker99504 successfully brout the 2 characters to an out-of-ordinary set of circumstances where the unimaginable becomes the order of the day.
While reading the story i was imagining that the same was happening to me and my mom. My mom used to be the protagonist in most of my jack-off fantasies.
My god an excellent start to a great story noe wind it up and let it run right to the funush.keep up the good work.