by brewdude2003
Good descriptives, some pretty interesting subtext going on. It felt a bit rushed, but that's not so bad. Fun.
I loved the last few chapters even though he prematurely ejaculated.
Dude! I Have Yet To Meet A Sports Bra With A Clasp... They Come Off Like Tank Tops. Please Learn About Stuff Before You Write. Aside From That... Pretty Good Man!. Look Forward To Another