All Comments on 'A Love Filled Longing'

Loved it! I'd love to hear more about them. (As long as they stay together hehe) Will they move in together? Have a child together? Will ANYONE ever find out? Eventually Jude will be old enough to notice right?

Great story. 5*

Beautiful well paced story

Thank you

Wow for your first story you packed a punch in this one. I loved it. I hope we get to read more of these two as they live their lives as a couple. Maybe there is a baby on the way already. Well done thank you.

I give it 5 stars. Only the 4th time I have ever done that, I am a tuff grader. Wow! I am not personally a practitioner or even a proponent of incest, but this was the most believable and heart-warming love story I ever remember reading. Flawless writing skills. Well plotted and absent the too often apparent dialogue that strains credulity. An amazing first story and I am now Following in hopes I can catch all future publications.

A beautiful love story. I hope to see more of your work here.

Great love story. And I would remind you that the #1 selling ice cream is vanilla ...

Jim

Is this really your first story because I found it absolutely marvelous. Please keep up the great work

Exceptional story! I look forward to more. What a tremendous debut!

Ecstasy: Completing a great story, and clicking to read more of what they've written... Agony: Discovering that this was the first one they're written...

Insta-follow. Bravo!

You a natural. Please continue to write

Thanks to each of you for your comments thus far. I've been writing stories for a very long time. I've churned out dozens of chapters and stories but I've abandoned even more, so this is the first one that's been fit for publication. Your interest and feedback has lifted me an untold amount. Rachel and Ian's story isn't finished, so I hope to see each of you in the next one. 

I think it was plain and boring. Like you're writing a storyline for a Lifetime movie.

Very well written. None of the hyperbole like in other stories. This read more like a great novel. Keep up the writing.

I loved it and hope you will continue with the story, I could feel the love they have for one another and hope they will move in together. As for Jude I think he feels like his aunt is his mother.

Fantastic Story! 5 star all the way! PLEASE continue writing! You have a serious gift!

More, please provide more...loved the story.

Extraordinary. Reads as truth. Thankful for your labors and love

That was by far the best, most intense and beautifully written erotic story I have ever read. Well done and thank you

What a wonderful love letter to Rachel and to a lesser extent, Jude. Ian's words are so beautiful, the way he depicts his blossoming and deepening love for his sister it's what every woman wants from a lover. I'd like to read more of this love story so I'm looking for future stories. Thank you for sharing with your readers.

An enchanting sibling love story filled with strong emotion. Next chapter please...

Excellent. So much to take in that I know I'll need to read it again. Thank you so much! If you write more of these two I would be sorry to miss it. Maybe a continuance from Rachel's point of view?

Beyond outstanding. As a guy (56) who is at the beginning of a relationship with my his sister (53), I appreciate that this story is heavy on emotion and light on the actual sex. Makes for a better read. These emotions are much heavier than those of a standard relationship.

Really outstanding on many levels. Hooked me right away.

Really enjoyed the pace of this one and the deepening intimacy you achieved without having to resort to the typical sexual ramping up seen in these stories, the way you built up their bond seemed natural and realistic, was left wanting more but was happy overall how this turned out as a solid piece.

Then I read into the comments and see there may be more on the horizon! So stoked and keen to see where this goes next, maybe expanding into how they continue to figure out how their relationship works in their lives or to see what happens when his ex tries to worm her way back into his or his sons life.

Wholesome uWu 5 stars

There is continuation to this story? Can't wait! Maybe rachel and ian have a child, jude's lil sis perhaps? Then you can follow with jude and his sister's story? Who knows.

Very well written you could actually feel the deep love that he has for this beautiful person as well as the commitment they hold for each other . Thoroughly enjoyed it .

Great story. Hope to read a sequel.

A well trodden path but beautifully done, loved it.

Absolutely wonderful story.

This was a wonderfully beautiful story. The only qualm I had at all the entire bit of it was Rachel refusing to look at him the first time they were together. She said she wanted everything, he asked tons of times, but she can't look at him or relax the entire time, he even stopped to ask her if she was okay. >.> I think he was in the right going back to his house, she wasn't participating at all. Her having a breakdown after feeling so many emotions makes sense after the fact, but during it? After she told him not to stop, yet still wouldn't look at him? That said, I am glad she actually called him and assured that she wanted him to come back over and that she immediately said she wanted to try again. That was really reassuring and the second time she fully participated and thus, all the unsureness immediately evaporated. I loved how you could fell their emotions throughout the entire story. That was amazing! Then they effortlessly flowed into an actual relationship full of love and intimacy and Jude :3

Very romantic!

That was a damn good story and I hope there is a second chapter for them in the future!!!

Sometimes, my trying to express myself gets in the way of my true message. So let me try this:

OUTSTANDING, SIMPLY OUTSTANDING!!

More of this outstanding story please. When will they move in together and be a couple? Will they be dicovered? will there be babies?

Absolutely phenomenal. I would give it 6 stars if I could. I tried to find flaws, even minute ones but failed. Best read across the whole platform!

Absolutely incredible story I loved everything. The build up ,story arc and it was as realistic as possible chef' s Koss I'm book marking this and praying you write another like this soon!

THIS STORY NEEDS HIGHER RATING. EVERYONE PLEASE SEE HOW EXCELLENT THIS STORY IS. GIVE IT MORE RATING PLEASE.

Also WHERE USBTHE WRITER? Write more stories BOSS.

𝕋𝕙𝕖𝕤𝕖 𝕥𝕨𝕠 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕞𝕦𝕔𝕙 𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕘𝕖𝕣 𝕔𝕠𝕦𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕒𝕟𝕪 𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕.

Such a marvelous way of storytelling. Kudos to the writer. If you are still reading comments, hope to see more works from you.

The characters felt so real. The story also felt closer to reality than fantasy.

If there is a next part, I would like to see a happy future with their 2nd child (Jude is like actual son to Rachel). Also a part woth Rachel's PoV would be nice to see.

Man the story was so SWEET and emotional, I can't put enough good words for it.

Fascinating storytelling style

Feels like a real life experience and the love is so deep.

I would live to see another installment of this story and a PoV part from Rachel to answer some questions in this part.

Marvelous work 10 on 10. Please continue.

Also my previous comment got lost here, why did that happen?

If you send me an email through the message feature on Lit, I always respond. Be sure to check spam!

Great story. Would love a sequel

Very mix of detail and description. It seemed to me the writer had experienced the longing.

This story was written incredibly well. I would LOVE to read more of your work! Thank you for a DEEP and meaningful story instead of the cliché 18 year old sister and 20 year old brother fuck his sausage meat bullshit LOL.

I like sibling romance stories and thought this one was exceptional. CINCO ESTRELLAS!

This is a 10/10 story. Very sweet and romantic in a needy and hot way I identify with. Great job

Great story but it needs an ending. HEA...

Beautiful story beautifully written!

11/10!!!!!

So fucking nice, must read everyone, and will be a reread for me!

Wonderfully exciting story line. I look forward to more of your tales.

very enjoyable

Beautiful written so well the love and tenderness between brother and sister felt like I was there watching the closeness that would I would give to my sister years ago

Thank you so much