by Niorun
Stories that show the love between the people are the most sexy. I just wish I could have read more. Keep up the good work.
I love it when at the beginning they start out kissing. Loved it! Well told and had everything. Good work.
I couldn't finish this story because I was annoyed by how many times you referred to her "lover". Reminded me of that SNL skit with Will Ferrell and Rachel Dratch. I'm sure it's not a bad story, but I wish the lover's name was used.