All Comments on 'A Love Rekindled Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep it up!

Awesome first chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Hurry up! JK, but not really.

laf199laf199over 8 years ago

I'm always a sucker for a good love story, and this is a promising start. I'm guessing the wife has other things keeping her from home than just the snow storm. I do hope that his marriage is a little more complicated; it would seem too easy if he just meets his long lost love and then can conveniently divorce his wife who he has no feelings for. I like more complicated stories, so I would personally enjoy it more if he still had some feelings for his wife and had to decide between her and Alli. But like I said, a good start.

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