All Comments on 'A Lovers Desire'

This was a very well written, very erotic story. I would love to hear more about those two, maybe an escapade with an older woman or family member.......!!!

Changing my name to Drew immediately - already have the hazel eyes and big cock so I am all set there.

Hot story - love to know more about the author -- care to take the bate ssssssssssssssssssssssssss

What an excellent piece of prose, great characters, intriguingly charged plot and such mature writing. Naughty Pleasure where have you been hiding this talent until now? Hard and wet with anticipation for further episodes.... Jack

Enjoyed the steamy dialogue. Well done.

WHAT A STORY! I beseech you, write another one, this one was awe-inspiringly erotic and fun.

Well what's to say when one is speachless?

Thanks for putting me in your favorites who knows maybe somneday we can talk a bit. Loved reading your fearless approach to a sexual scene that is both delicious and enticing. More please!

peace and Write Write Write because it's the right thing to do!

I'll be posting more now so I hope you visit and enjoy.

Tickled and most appreciative to all of you for your kind words. Many thanks for your support and comments. Happy writing and may your days and nights be filled with Naughty Pleasure.

shhhhhhhhhhhhhh listen

Love that hot steamy dialogue. Please write more!