All Comments on 'A Loving Fairy Tale'

Good story. I like it a lot. AAAA++++

Very, very good. Thank you

What a wonderful tale, puts a whole new perspective on the term, fairy tale.

Nice. Beautiful story.

Its one a kind, great work. Thanx for great effort u put in. Its not easy to write a great story i have been trying 1 for 2 months now bt in vain 5*****s

Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing it!

What a cool world you have created. I'll be checking out dragonflies now, looking at them with slitty eyes in case they're secretly fairies.

God that was sweet. I want more from Dennis and Eide!

Wow, just wow

Siri, where is the favriet button on literotica?

Very sweet…!

A pleasure to read..

pretty much ruined it once you had Heidi start explaining shit and having him be a fairy too; dumb.

what would have been wrong with her coming in and saving her dying human 'lover/fiance' with immortal fairy magic? nothing. instead, you introduced a whole bunch of shit fiction mechanics that are completely irrelevant.

Unexpected but utterly entertaining 💗. A great story. I just lost my wife and am looking forward to our reunion 💖. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 👍

In my view, a sweet and loving masterpiece; an excellent source of ideas for my new book (eventually). Two set of 5* ratings end-to-end.

BJ

One of your best works. Thank you.

You touched my heart. Anything else I could say would be meaningless.

Loved this.

Wonderful story. Would be cool to have a sequel where he meets his sister.

Great story, interesting take on the Fey.