All Comments on 'A Loving Relation'

by LouisaLove

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RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
Superb writing

Hot, steamy sex. This story was a joy to read!

fridayamfridayamover 13 years ago
How lovely

to see you back, and to read such a hot story:)

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Very Nice

This is a great story. Although I can't imagine sharing someone w/ my sister, it's nice to read a story about sharing based on trust. I may have to go back and read some of your other works. This story could continue with the next day hint hint

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepover 13 years ago
Hot hot hot

Damn girl, you know how to write a story thats for sure.

IncandescenceIncandescenceover 13 years ago
Oh my!

That was incredibly hot! Great writing too! Well done indeed.

texasacetexasaceover 13 years ago
Thanks, and keep it UP, Luv...

You have outstanding talent for writing hot, sexy delicious stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not good

Bad English. Bad grammar and bad description. I couldn't read more than a few paragraph.

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Risque

Another risque memory from you! I enjoyed it.

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