All Comments on 'A Lustful Crossing'

Yay! Alternate realities make for such a good excuse to do all sorts of perverse things. :) Don't be afraid to elaborate on the narrator's feelings, it feels a little bit rushed after your character took such great control of the set-up. He might have a time limit, but we understand that his thoughts aren't taking up that much time. Nice work, welcome to Lit!

I like it, nc incest is pretty rare,

very hot

I am not an incest type of person but I did find your writing a big turn on.... interesting... zoe